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Sooo, how did Mr. Hoopa learn the Return phrase? Did the Chaotix told him off screen? And the part with Faust? Well, we all know what anthros look like but aside from her skin/coat color, maybe you could have described if she has wings and a horn? For all we know, she could have a star shaped mark instead of her horn.
Dunno, maybe you could describe the `Mons a bit? Not everyone knows how they look. Maybe just give bare minimum describtions?
Who else but Patty hn?
Nice so far. I like how this is going so far
This story feels more like a pokemon fanfic then i mlp one
6853650 hard to make it more mlpish in a desolate wasteland don't you think?
6853650 Yeah, the thing is that it is MLP related. It's just that it occurs in one of the alternate timelines shown in the season 5 finale. More specifically, Tirek
6830198 The hoopa learned the phrase via reading other displaced stories before being displaced
Aww... poor Ita
6931188 you just get done reading to another world there frost? yeah that kinda came outa nowhere for me and dj to...
6931411 Now I want to make her feel better xP
6931443 you could do a cross with again if you want, have you appear while shes still hugging the pillow...
6931464 Maybe later
6933287 this seems more like a Pokémon porn adventure story then a mlp crossover oh well still good read and dang I could barley finish this with out having to take a break to jack off I got so horny at points your lucky this site doesn't ban porn stores.
6938899 Well, it's during the alt timeline from when Tirek destroyed the place so yeah
6938906 humpty humpty hump is the main story line and I like that.
6938954 Hey my displacer is literally part succubus, what'd you expect? XD
6939026 lots and lots of sex which I would really like to be apart of sadly I can't oh well life sucks.
6939042 if you have a displaced im sure we could arrange something
6939048 sorry I don't have one, wish I did but there are to many shows and games to choose from and to many characters to turn into plus I'm not a good writer so there's that to plus I'm sure my Dick would make it even harder to concentrate on writing the story if we did a crossover of characters and if I did I would make my own character who can learn all forms of alchemy from fullmetal alchemist that includes scares alchemy and the ones from the movies but he can't use the clapping hands thing that Edward uses unless he does a human transmutation or use them all right away just 4 to start off with because that would be to op but again I'm not a good writer so I would have trouble doing it in the first place.
6939108 Ask The Emerald Nightengale for her, it's what I did...
6939117 I might if I have the time thanks and by the way holly hell this is a hot story when I was looking for a hoopa story I did not have this in mind but I'm not complaining!!!! is there any way you could do a regular hoopa displaced where the hoopa wakes up at the castle of the two sisters and is found by twilight while searching for a book or something that would be great but only a suggestion and after your done with this story because I have seen many of stores cancelled by writers because they tried to write 2-4 at a time and it sucked watching all that potential wasted because of a overload.
6939178 hmmm good suggestion i'll have to try something like that, later
6939185 did this Emerald Nightingale make delta guardian?
6939199 yeah that one
6939203 thank you now I know who to pester later to get my story going by hope this story does good and maybe the next one I suggested but try to make that one t for teen so that you have one that's hot and one that involves lots of innuendos for the ones who don't read the mature storys get to see your work because I know there out there and they deserve to see your lovely works of art. Again just a suggestion you can make it whatever you want I'm just putting in my two cents is all.
Yay, more family and possible sexy times with the new sister.
6957151 XD maybe :P
And yet, this is the deleted scenes of Hearts and Hooves day xP
6977242 hey, when are we working on the thing?
6977383 When I have more time
6977658 okay
Can you do more please and in Zinnia story dose she dies and will we see her Agen
Team Dazzling's blasting off agaaaaain!
Bacon.
Great story.
Wow... uh... that happened.
7723805 yep...
7724494 Would she remember Ken though?
7724819
depends on how much Zi had to do with their interaction
7724884 It was only a small bit. Remember, Ita found his token.,, and if Ita did see him, he may be having a hard time... coping.
7724896
crossover sometime?
7725042 Maybe. Just busy at the moment
7725207 tell me when ya can
7725300 Sure. If you want to talk about it in PM's, that's fine too
Good chapter
Please write another chapter. I love this story it's in my top three favorite stories
6830218 Aye, and maybe describe the moves? I imagine even a fanatic of the series would forget what some of the moves do and look like. Honestly, just try describing things more as a whole. Think things like, "What color is it?" and, "What does it feel like?" Or taste like, smell, sound, everything. Use all five senses to describe things. Within reason, of course. Would be kinda weird for the character to taste the wall unless they were slammed into it, ya?
7733220 I'll try... maybe, if I remember
6830230 Yea.