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Kanna
The story was rigged from the start...
Kanna
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First fic huh?
For your first fic it was rather good
By the way. If you decide on cross-overs aka meeting other Displaced, be sure to choose wisely of whom you meet and how many you meet, you don't want to ruin the story you've got going.
Coolio my amigo, you released your first fic. I hope you do well friend.
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Yep...
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Thanks :D
nice! a little more in these chapters and it will be even better
I like this fanfiction. And even though this is your first Story, I say it's enjoyable as an person who cares little about grammar as long as the Story is good. You can only become better
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Okay
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Thank you that means a lot to me
Lookin' at dislikes, i expected this to be a complete garbage, but no, pretty much normal story, as far as normal goes in this place.
Possibly one of those cases where people throw dislikes just because they can.
Going fine so far, tracking.
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Most of them throw dislikes because of the following. 1. They hate displaced because it's.. "overdone" 2. they hate it because of the grammar/spelling. 3. They hate it because the beginning is the same as other Displaced, they never try to read anything past chapter 1 and they assume it'll be the same. 4. Trolls
You misspelled easy
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Thank you for pointing that out
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As long as it has more likes than dislikes and that the author is improving with age and constructive criticism, that's all that matters regardless of how bad things are.
I am trying to write a little more into these chapters next time, but i am sooo lazy...
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Try talking with friends, listening to music, day dreaming, relaxing, etc, anything to spark inspiration.
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I got the "practicing" part when i was watching mortal kombat x
nice chapter. it is quite small though
In my opinion it would have been better if he had to learn how to control it
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Well he still need to learn saurons so :/
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Come back please
"Damn you sun!"
I understand.
Also, pardon my language but, ”FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK YOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUU SUN!!!!!!”
Raphtalia? Is that you?
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