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Dunno, maybe you could describe the `Mons a bit? Not everyone knows how they look. Maybe just give bare minimum describtions?
6830218 Aye, and maybe describe the moves? I imagine even a fanatic of the series would forget what some of the moves do and look like. Honestly, just try describing things more as a whole. Think things like, "What color is it?" and, "What does it feel like?" Or taste like, smell, sound, everything. Use all five senses to describe things. Within reason, of course. Would be kinda weird for the character to taste the wall unless they were slammed into it, ya?