(Relax listen I'm very busy with 2 stories at once and those who were excited for a gore fest right now I apologize your going to have a wait a little longer I'll put one in once the story is done and I have more time and I'm a little more experienced at writing I hope you can understand ok back to the story)

I watched few horror movies, but I´m still not sure where I draw the line.

I try to read one such a scene if you should write it, and then I probably know if I like to read about it or not.

After I have sex with someone it then sends a magical spell into there bodies straight into there blood stream until it reaches there heart and it cause it to stop beating.

I think Mass Effect had something similar, but it had a better explanation, I´m not sure if I´m happy with the reason.

.....not sure if the last part is explanation enough, but I let it go. I´m still in the mood to read this,
I forgot what I wanted to say, but even if I sound a bit wary, be sure that I can take such stuff, and doesn´t judge the story, just because it could get a bit messy in later chapters.

I would like to have a new chapter please.

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