Bravo! Good Job! Once again you made an amazing story! And I am not being sarcastic just to let you know. I truly enjoy this. Can't wait for another chapter!
Only thing bothering me about this is the language. So can you tone the curse words down a bit? Just wondering. I am not saying it is bad but just a little extreme.
Interesting idea, but you really need an editor.
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There are a ton of grammatical and structural mistakes with the story that make it hard to read.
Bravo! Good Job! Once again you made an amazing story! And I am not being sarcastic just to let you know. I truly enjoy this. Can't wait for another chapter!
Only thing bothering me about this is the language. So can you tone the curse words down a bit? Just wondering. I am not saying it is bad but just a little extreme.
It is a bit strange what happened so far, but way to soon for me to say much about the story.