This follows the story of a rogue changeling as she discovers herself. She does not have anything to do with the changelings attack on Canterlot, she does, however, arrive at ponyville soon after the day of the wedding.
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bnewton
Brony with creative juices, that is all.
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sounds and looks a lot like my OC, Shadow (except he's a pegasus). though he was at the canterlot invasion (He's a changeling) should be interesting
fairly great. though it gets a bit excessive at times
still fine though 
i recommend spreading all events out and adding adjectives, as well as replacing 'say, said'
If you ever have need of assistance with your story, I could give you some ideas. I have a habit of thinking what you could do with stories and some ponies have said they would ask me when they need it. By the way the name is raine. You can contact me about anything anytime even just to talk. You could message me on here or email me at rainerobinson@ymail.com
very interesting but you skip past a lot. to me it looks like you focused on mainly the important parts and skimmed the parts inbetween such as the weeks she was with fluttershy or the walk through town.
Kay, so I have fans?
Awesomesauce aside, I mainly was trying not to bore you with the details of how day in and day out Red Curtain just eats, sleeps, drinks, and does boring tedious chores like feeding the chickens.
That aside, I thought I was doing the same thing HP by JK Rowling does, keeping readers up-to-date on the juicy bits of the story while leaving out needless filler such as; "I went outside and looked around. It was bright and green and peaceful. I trot over to the chickens and levitate the bag of birdseed off my back, and dump its contents into a bowl." If I did that over and over and over again, with little variation, I imagine you'd get bored.
But just because you guys are so awesome, I'll put in a few scenes to make you (wait for it)
grin grin grin.