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Dusk Raven
"Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia." - Kurt Vonnegut. Currently accepting commissions!
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Nice, romantic clop. I would like to see more.
Death god.
More please!
Instead of breaking and entering, this is coming in and having sex with school teacher.... Okay then.... u wot
Awesome fic!!! Looking forward for more
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Just hoping that the drama part of the story doesn't come from a love triangle. I hate those
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Admittedly, it's not just about that, there's a couple factors as well. Actually, I'd say most the drama revolves around who "he" is. But yes, I would consider a love triangle part of the equation in due time. Considering how I usually see love triangles handled - and having been in one, myself - I don't blame you for a moment, though.
It's nice to see when Cheerilee also gets some attention. There's not many clopfics with her
6643417 I haven't actually looked, but I had a feeling that most of them are with students or otherwise have the fact that she's a teacher as a prominent point. It was nice to not have that in play. That said, I do have my reasons for picking Cheerilee in particular...
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This looks cool
Thats exactly my problem with love triangles
, so many great romances in fanfics get spoiled for me because of that 
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I'm still looking forward for more thought
Nice job on this! :D hehehe, loved it.
Very very awesome!
Bat pone~
6711318 BATPONY. Best royal guard.
Meanwhile, it has occurred to me that perhaps I should work on this. Unfortunately, finding time to write clop is surprisingly hard to do... <.<
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Ohohoh trust me, I know how you feel about that Dx I'm trying to write it myself and it is surprisingly hard to do.
Awesome.
Hehehehehe, man I love it! NIce new chapter dude, a good read~
This story is just frigging awesome, I love it! I mean, yeah the clop is good, but i like how its being told, its very nice
Lovely work my friend! :D
*insert rythmic backbeat*
Night One, Day One;
Night two, Wooo!
Sounded better in my head...
I gotta ask is th stallion visiting her out of love or just for some free sex cause I might be forming the basis of a story upon your answer being he's just doing it for sex
7387998 You'll have to find oooouuuuut~
...Which would require me to actually work on this. Hmm. Thanks for reminding me.
If you have an idea for a story, though, feel free to work on it!
Oooohohohooh, its good to see this alive!
Damn fine job man, damn fine job!
to all those that are... suck it up and get over it. That was a day chapter.
8131563 Well yeah, it's just that I haven't finished the next Night chapter yet.
8131580 that is perfectly understandable. I was simply pointing out for others to be patient. This is good. God knows better than what I do
Color me excited. I was worried this had been abondoned, glad to see it is continuing.
Go at your own pace. Rather you take forever with a good story then rush a bad one. And trust me when I say, this IS a good one.
8132276 Oh, I know better than to rush a story. The very first story I posted on here suffered from that flaw... now I can't even bear to go back and edit it because I cringe at my own writing.
Still, I'm oddly proud of this story... and at least I don't have far to go!
Always good to see a story I like come back from the death
.Good job on this chapter, looking foward for more 
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Isn't this scene from the Heart and Hooves episode where the Crusaders make a rape drug or something?
8159230 No, this is months later. The episode in question is when they started the picnic tradition (one of the eps of season 3 has Cheerilee and Big Mac in the background heading off to a picnic, so it seems they continued having "dates" of some sort).
Also, the "love poison" isn't particularly desirable as a "rape drug."
8159332 Oh, that one. A lotta things can happen in the background.
When’s the baby
Fudge, now I need one of those.
Another good chapter, short and sweet. Looking forward to the next one, good lad.
Ooooo yeeeees! God I love this story, I'm happy to see it continuing!
This story is is delucious~
Good job on this chapter, it was awesome!
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I hoped this chapter would go over well. I knew that every so often he'd hold back from orgasming so-as to keep rutting her for a while, and that this would be one of those nights. It also ways a chance to have Cheerilee become rather carnal in the heat of the mood~
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And damn, it was worth the wait, I love it!
It certainly did!
In before he turns out to be mute and illiterate
I'm so happy this is back, it has lots of promise. Can't wait for more!
If I didn’t know any better, I’d think that Cheerilee just wants to experience what it’s like to be in the “Twilight” franchise.
i been sitting on my story forever. every time i come up with a good story or theme i find one already done and better than mine.
care to dare? >:)
2 chapters for 2 chapters by Christmas.
show me yours and i'll show you mine. =~-^=
Please make more
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To be honest, I consider it functionally finished. There was just going to be a "morning" chapter with no sex but some character development, but I couldn't think of a way to do it properly...
She had mixed feelings about this crush of his.
One the one hand, it meant he
wouldn't be too upset when she told him
about her “crush.”
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that you have a typo(highlight part). Keep up the good work.
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Even after all this time, there are still missed typos! Thanks for pointing it out.
Also, that section ought to tell you how old this fic is. Ah, the days when MarbleMac was potentially canon...