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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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I was corrupted by the Great and Powerful Pusspuss into writing this story with the promises of art!

That's fukken right son! And don't you forget it. :flutterrage:

Anyways... Time to read. :rainbowkiss:

DAMMIT! I just GET back HOME and NOW, I got a BONER!
Edit: Eh, funny. that really kinky. very... kinky. like super HOT!

"The Everfree Moon?" Cheerilee read the sign.

I forgot you said you where going to do put the Everfree Moon into the story and I squeed. :twilightsheepish:

Oh man! This was awesome! I'm so glad I bullied persuaded you into writing this wonderful story! I had a lot of fun reading it and it caused me to grin like an idiot. Cheerilee was a delight and I thought Daniel was a pretty likable guy!

Thanks again man!

P.S. This was pretty hot. :ajsmug:

6621935 Thanks, I wasn't sure most would like the fact that Daniel was in his late thirties but I thought it would be appropriate since I always imagined Cheerilee to be slightly older mare. I'm very glad that you liked it

A CHEERILEE X HUMAN FIC?! ...

Seriously Though Great Work.

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That's why I asked him to do it!

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Dude that was perfect. I loved that idea! It fits really well.

6622035 These Fics With Human X Cheerilee Are Next To None. It's Great To See One.

6622039 I'm glad to hear that. I'm getting really tired of all those young humans in the perfect age and what not. Oh, and if you're wondering about Daniel's appearance, I based him off my dad
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PS- My dad is currently in his late forties, this picture was taken a few months back. It only shows just how well my family matures, like fine wine

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My thoughts exactly. She needs more love.

Yeah I know, I'm bad at writing descriptions, you will just have to read the story.
From my experinces at "The Pitt" aka Fanfiction.net this is a bad sign.

Dan

Pusspuss has good taste.

Cheerilee-sensei can always use more love.

Dan

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She was in the same grade as Rarity or close to it. Presumably she's close in age to Big Mac.

Though her human counterpart was a teacher and Mac was eating in the cafeteria. I imagine Eqg Cheerilee was barely older than the students, maybe a college freshman, and was volunteering at the CHS library.

Or EQG-verse ages are all just "It's magic. We don't have to explain." bullshit.

6623448 Well, considering that in Equestria Girls both Celestia and Luna are humans while their equine counterparts are thousands of years old, I'd rather not use Equestria Girls as a reliable source

Like the Cheerilee fics.

There were parts i liked, overall it felt really bland

BUT the main attraction which is clop was fantastic!

Daniel managed to get himself accepted to a prestigious collage in Manehattan.

It had glitter and everything. Even their collage days were the start of their friendship.

This is neat, a tad more original than a lot of similar fics. Nice Treasure Planet reference too, that gets me every time :pinkiesmile:
But just one thing:

Cheerilee smiled cheekily, lowering herself until she was face to face with the object that destroyed her cunt.

That has to be one of the least sexy things I've read in a while.

Great story, requires a few grammar fixes though

6626489 I know. I tried finding an editor but it's tough

6626785 I'd be willing to help

6627581 I would very much appreciate it, thank you

6627594 let me know when you need a grammar check, and I'll be glad to help ya out

pusspuss is worse than pussy.....

l hope l will be there, catching some of the light coming out of you that day."

these look suspiciously like lower case L's in the story text

How old is Cheerlie?

i very love this story :pinkiehappy: sooooo amazing:rainbowkiss:

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Yes, yes she does.

*Cough* *Cough*
:raritywink:

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M-maybe one day... :twilightsheepish:

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*wink* *wink*:raritywink:
...
what are we playing?

7331935
*cough* *wink* *cough* *cough* *wink*
...

I have no idea. :raritystarry:

7331940
*sneeze*

Uh, what? :rainbowderp:

"Great and Powerful Pussy" ............................ *dies from lack of oxygen*

Pretty great read, loved the characters and thought I was well written! :twilightsmile:

"We take it slow, see where this relationship takes us," Daniel answered. "And under any circumstances, we must never, ever, ever do something too hasty…"

Wanna bet?

"Remember, you got the makings of greatness inside of yourselves but you gotta take the helm and chart your own course. Stick to it, no matter the squalls, and when the time comes you get the chance to really test the cut of your sails and show what you're made of, well… I hope I will be there, catching some of the light coming out of you that day."

Favorite movie.

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