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Quandary


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yep totally cheating on dash. What an upstanding citizen

...What a dick, just leave the part about him feeling any sense of guilt out if you are gonna have him not do anything with it >_<

hmm what to say.... Kinda feel bad for both Rainbow and Anon here. Anon didn't ask to be put in the situation, yet....he's certainly not regretting it. Having Trixie play such an underhanded trick is also intriguing and it's good to see her karma. I'd love to see how this all pans out :)

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Trixie's command to Anon, still under perfume's power:

"That's a good Anon. That's right. Give Trixie all of your cum."

Some of Anon's thoughts right after Trixie gets sprayed:

Give Trixie all of your cum.
...all of your cum.

Notice any similarities?
I mean, I understood he was still at least a little mind-controlled just from the context clues in the last few paragraphs. But that echo is kinda what seals the deal there.

5383897 Ok I see the spell still effected him

GOD DAMNIT HOW DARE YOU FINISH THIS WITH A CLIFFHANGER

You, dear author, are even worse than Trixie. At least she allowed her living toy to finish. :trixieshiftleft:

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You, dear author, are even worse than Trixie. At least she allowed her living toy to finish. :trixieshiftleft:

Ah, you wound me, sir. But I will admit, you are in the right on this one. Apologies for the delay--some pressing matters have forced me to put this particular project on hold the last couple weeks.

Rest assured though, more Trixie fun will be coming soon. I think you'll like what's in store. :raritywink:

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Just finished this and was about to label this a major tease, good to hear that you will let the rest of this play out. :trixieshiftright:

Is there a sequel to this? It totally needs a sequel.

Most excellent.

New Chapter! Huzzzah!

Well that was fucking hot.

I found a minor thing you may want to edit.

You can her Trixie swallow thickly, gulping down your essence to keep from choking.

That should be "hear".

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Should be fixed now. (Thanks for the notice!)

Your views on what amounts to date rape with roofies do not amuse or arouse me in any way. That is some shit you should have warned us about in the description.

The same amount of green that Indecent Dash got, this receives in red.

Yeeeesssss! Need more:flutterrage: XD

MrB

5738218 are they human or are they ponies in this story?

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They appear to be ponies.
Also, Quandary needs to make another chapter. Cause this shit is awesome.

The question that comes to my mind is: if Trixie got the whole bottle, will there be lasting effects towards the human?
There should be, Trixie being bossed around is hot.

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To be quite fair, he did warn you. "Date rape" and "mind control" should have been enough to give you a hint as to what it was going to be like.

I honestly don't see the point in basically commenting "disliked". If you didn't like it, just don't read it again. Pretty simple. I don't really think the author gives a shit. He did warn you.

And I'm guessing by the dislikes on your comment that people don't agree with you.

I like how in the description you put "shame free clop".i now feel a lot better about reading this

"Celestia-fucking-Christ!"

Well there's a mental image that's not going away any time soon...

I know that this story is supposed to be hot but goddamn I really hate rape. Trixie straight up used him against his will; not even asking him if he wants to do this shit. If I was Anon I would've dragged her ass and her suggestion potion to the local guard and throw her in jail. Maybe even cut off her horn

There is a huge difference between a mind control fetish on consenting adults and rape.

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