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There's too much to say here so I'll wait for the next chapter and instead just say this.
It is good to see you again old friend
I'm curious where this would lead, I also want to see Twilight get in big trouble for this.
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She better be.
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I feel like Sunset is the least guilty one here, Twilight told her Fluttershy was in trouble and she jumped in to save a friend almost dying in the process. In fact she is the one who has been given the short end of the stick, she technically has almost died twice when everypony else in the room deserves it more.
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Agreed.
Sees new chapter of favorite fic.
Le me:
Kill them all Sombra! defend your home, subjects and most importantly wife!
Also please don't go the stereotypical route of this attack causing Fluttershy to miscarriage or otherwise end up with the baby dead.
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I definitely agree with the notion that both Sunset and Moondancer are the least guilty members of Twilight's assassination squad and the fact they both got it the worst, both of them lost months of their lives in comas with Sunset's life on the other side of the mirror derailed and Moondancer's probably in the same.
Also does anyone want to make a bet on what King Sombra's historians will write the assassination attempt as?
My bet is that it will be seen as the action of a vengeful princess who felt slighted for not being picked as King Sombra's bride.
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That does make me wonder, how come six angry girls and three pissed off sirens aren't coming over to find their friend.
So deep in thought don't realize you been shot
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Well for Sunset's friends, I'm assuming that they are unaware of Sunset's situation as she left without telling anyone where she was going and for how long.
As for the Sirens, I'm not sure why they would care about Sunset's fate as I would assume that they would hate her for destroying their pendents and power.
(If you can elaborate why I would appreciate it)
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Okay maybe the Dazzling no, but Sunset's friends know she's a pony and should be able to put two and two together when she has been gone for months.
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Okay I'll give the point on Sunset's friends putting together her disappearance, but then you have to give to the point that all contact between them and equestria has been cut off as Twilight, their other contact within equestria, has also disappear. And with the situation about Twilight's capture, the rest of the element bearers would probably overlook a buzzing book in the background for at least a while if not ignore it until the situation is resolved.
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True but I could imagine a determined and worried Sci-Twi could open the portal from the other side.
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Well if they did go through the portal, they would be in ponyville trying to get any information on Sunset's situation and probably be informed by Celestia
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Can you imagine any of them especially Rainbow Dash being pantient about this, they would be on their way to Sombra's kingdom as fasta s possible.
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No, I definitely doubt they would just wait. Most likely Celestia had to step in before either Luna or Shining Armor seconded their motion of invading King Sombra's territory to rescue their friends. In either case of them listening or not, they would be made to see the futility of such plans and force to rely on Princess Celestia's politics to save their friends. And the worst case scenario would be that they wouldn't take of it and try to rescue Sunset anyway which in turn may have forced Celestia to send them back throught the portal and shut off the bridging device to set the portals to the natural cycles.
Huh...I thought Sunset was killed off. Props for giving me the runaround, Mick.
Can't wait to hear Twilight's blustering. Maybe even be Starlight 2.0 about the whole situation...
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They can't shut it if it's open from the other side.
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Perhaps but even if Sunset's friends were able to open the portal again they would still have to go around Celestia and her attempts to negotiate for Twilight's freedom.
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Pretty sure any blustery King Sombra will be dealing with will be put in the back burner as his itinerary for the near future will be fill with the tasks of pirate hunting, pirate torturing, pirate executions, and ending each day with the placing of pirate heads onto pikes along the beachfront.
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It depend but if they summon their harmony power they could easily push through.
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They could if they were emotionally stable but I doubt it as the situation would have Sunset's friends in emotional overdrive, with at least EQ Rainbow Dash leading the charge with either EQ Applejack and EQ Pinkie Pie on just going into Equestria with no semblance of a plan. EQ Rarity and Sci-Twi both would be unsure how to act as she would probably be split between trusting their instincts of just going with the others or trusting the words of Celestia and hoping she knows the best way to help Sunset. And if we add in other factors that could increase the volatility of the situation, such as Princess Luna and Shining Armor, this would become a powder keg of a diplomatic nightmare for Princess Celestia in the rescue Twilight plan.
This is my all-time favorite ship....and this may be one of my favorites in the ship. Thank you for sharing your story and your skill with all of us!
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I don't think so, they don't much about Celestia. Also the fact that Sunset was over there might cause Celestia to have her own response, I have a feeling those two were really close.
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Well I do agree with the notion that the girls blind trust of Celestia would be questionable at best, I would think that they would have an initial trust in Celestia's word of her doing everything In her power to rescue their friends. But as the situation progress I would assume that trust would wane.
As for Celestia's response, I am basing her actions on her experience as a monarch for a 1000 years and that experience would have taught her that decisions made of rash emotions can have devastating effects on a nation's people
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Celestia clearly stated that she only wanted Twilight back, I'm pretty sure they would all explode in response to that.
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Agreed they would explode to such news, and the fact that Sunset has literally been abandon by her mother figure in what would probably be perceived for another would be salt in the wound.
Amongst the things Sunset needs to do when she wakes is get a good therapist.
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If that happened Equestria may be missing a princess due to Rainbow laser bombardment.
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yeah that probably would happen as a revenge fantasy
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I can't wait until they wake up.
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSS!!!! Sunset you’re alive!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! The chapter was too short!
No matter! You April’s fool me on this and I will be more steamed then a shot Sombra.
Personally, I'm glad Sombra didn't go with the motion of killing Sunset and Moondancer, and the only reason for that is Fluttershy. Sombra wanted a Queen by his side, a mare that would be equal to him and share the burden of wielding power over a nation, and he got it. He managed to bring out the inner strength that Fluttershy already had. It was proven when she protected that young colt from Sombra's wrath when the bandits first attacked. She sttod up to him and defied his direct order, and later Sombra learned that if he did kill that young colt, he would have made a terrible mistake, since the young one was forced to be in that raid.
Fluttershy declared that should Sombra go with the motion of killing Sunset and Moondancer, she would never forgive him, and she would make everything in her power to separate him from their child. And I believe she has the sttength and determination to do so. Sombra also knows, she told him that and he believes her words, after all he brought this out of her himself.
Now he must deal with the attackers, and later there may be a great fallout to clean up. Who knows, maybe now Starlight will see just what Sombra and Fluttershy must deal every day to make the land peaceful as Equestria, and understand the harshness of the laws. After all, experiencing the cruelty first hand is different than just hearing stories and listening to the court.
9538245 Hey, gotta sate that bloodlust somehow, since he can't kill his wife's friends.
Whomever shot him will be given a bad time.
This chapter, for it's short length, had a lot to it.
The griffons are gonna be in trouble, unless somehow they manage to "win" between chapter, which would be a sudden idiot ball moment on the citizens of New Haven the size of Luna's moon.
Twilight and co. will be waking up to fight for their lives. And Twilight will witness WHAT made Sombra how he is firsthand. Let's hope her rose-colored glasses aren't welded into her skull now...
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Everyone else is up here debating justice and moral responsibility, and all I can think are two things:
1: "through her down" should be "threw."
2: HOW DARE YOU TEASE ME WITH SUCH A SHORT CHAPTER!?
I await its addenda at your earliest convenience, if their reciept prior to that time cannot be arranged.
-Sincerely,
Cuy'val Dar,
Lover of all things feudal
Why so few words for such a long time since the last update?
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Broomstick you are a tease with this short chapter, and that cliffhanger!!!! But yay he didnt murder Sunset.
Promise me you won’t change how Sombra acts to he is more like the show.
The cliffhanger! I'm curious as to whether there will be any changeling intrigue in this story, not that it needs it per-say, but I don't think they're been discussed at all.
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I just saw the new episode. Sombra's canonical character is cancer in animated form.
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Continue to show us how he should be done. Long live the King! and Sunset
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I would never presume to elevate myself as the superior Sombra writer, I'm just saying I really didn't like canon Sombra. Flamboyant voice and personality that didn't at all match his appearance, inept and shortsighted when it came to his plans to reclaim the Crystal Throne, not to mention the fact that he was a bit of a pussy. I mean, come on, he was the first to be defeated in Gorok's little Legion of Doom he was putting together. Shit like this is why I prefer the comics.
Also, are the Elements of Harmony made of glass or something? They shattered like the Shikon Notama when they hit the ground...
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Preach!
You may not claim to be the best Sombra writer but your Sombra was the first Sombra I ever read. You are the measuring stick.
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Indeed; and it referred to religious sacrifices too. It’s just one of those words that doesn’t transfer over to pony stories very well.
I'm so mad I was notified this updated can't wait to read!