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cooopercrisp
Author of "Filly Fooling," "Cuddling," and "Spread."
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First. And nicely written i look forward to more writings from you
Well I say that was a thoroughly delightful story and it abounded with an overwhelming amount of care-free mirth.
I just hope you don't chew off a Hobo's face, like me, when you're on those "bath salts" you undoubtedly were on when you wrote this.
By the way that story was indeed a rather dark tale and I'm pretty sure they reserve a special place in pony-hell for people like you.
Anywho, job well done!
Carry On
...What...the...fuck...did...I...just...read...
No thanks, I can live without sleep.
i need brain bleach....STAT!!!
So dark, I feel as my own life has been taken......Empty.
I feel...empty inside.... GREAT JOB!
im scared, should I read it?
what the hell is this?
I'm sorry but any story that brutally kills off Rarity and Fluttershy gets an F in my book. Didn't thumb ya down or anything, just saying. On the plus side, you certainly know how to spell. So kudos for that.
torture porn is the antithesis of good taste
not bad at all
but fuuuuuuck!
remind me to never piss off discord XD
(Breaks into coopercrisps house, a after firing several times, corners him.) I know what you're thinking. "Did he fire six shots or only five?" Well, to tell you the truth, in all this excitement I kind of lost track myself. But being as this is a .44 Magnum, the most powerful handgun in the world, and would blow your head clean off, you've got to ask yourself one question: Do I feel lucky? Well, do ya, punk?
AAAAGH GOD WHY THE FUCK! *HURLLLL*
Run!, don't read this story RUN! IT'S FUCKING WORSE THAN CUPCAKES!!! IT MAKES CUPCAKES LOOK LIKE A CHILDREN'S SHOW!
RUN AWAY!!! BLAST IT WITH THUMB DOWNS AND FLEE FROM THE HATE!
ok... if it's your thing... ya ok but that was my reaction.
Also, you may want to add paragraph spacing so you don't get a giant wall of text like it is now.
Oh god why the f
ck did I read this? 
He's the God of Chaos. not the God of War/Torture.
My reaction:
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676712 Of all the characters, though, I think he's the one who would most plausibly do something like this. Obviously the show would never feature such dark material, but if it did, I think Discord would be far more evil than he is now...if that makes sense.
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it was well written but sad. 4/5 because it was kinda scary.
This was great, but the visuals almost made me lose the rest of my sanity too......great job
seriously I am too scared to open it and read.
coopercrisp has done some magnificent things in the past, and If this is anything like previous work it will be pretty high up there among it's genre. but that is what scares me, as far as I am concerned coopercrisp is up there with TAW and the other gods of Fanfic. so this will either be terrifying or....I don't even know of an alternative, so I ask myself; do I feel lucky?
Coopercrisp, we now have a love-hate relationship, I hate loving your work. WHY DID I READ THAT!? oh god save me, that was...brutal and amazing you have scared me in ways I did not believe possible. I now fear myself on a personal level, as well as fearing Discord. but i fear myself more because I have always felt most at home in chaos and discord, so if given all that power, what would I do? would I do that to people? what would I become? what am I? why does that question scare me? I know one thing though, i will never be able to watch the episode with Discord in it again. I also know another thing, Pinkamina is nothing compared to vengeful Discord.
You seem to think that the scene with the CMC fighting caused Discord to be released. You're wrong. That fight was foreshadowing what was going to happen (you know, friends fighting each other?). Don't believe me? Read Discords bio, look up someone who works on the show's Q&A, or, better yet, actually listen to what Celestia said on how and why Discord escaped.
I also highly doubt that the mane 6 would just go up to the statue and have a quarrel, even if Discord couldn't escape from feuding.
Also, Discord is all about mind fucking, and he says that he doesn't ever physically hurt ponies, so if anything, this would fit Night Mare Moon, not a fucking Diet Kefka/Q/Brain Guy wannabe.
682662 I hate to get into semantics, but "coincides" is the keyword here. Their fighting happens to occur at the same time that Discord breaks free again. If you will, allow Queen Chrysalis to be the real cause of his release.
As for Nightmare Moon, I think Luna knows better than to try that stint again.
Oh well, I can't make everypony like my story...
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Discord made them fight, that's what the foreshadowing meant.
Night Mare Moon and Luna are two different entities. Yeah, Luna did become Night Mare, but it was from some evil magic (Lauren kept this purposely cryptic), but Night Mare became her own being, and basically was using Luna as a host body. Luna is not Night Mare, and vice versa.
The story isn't bad, it just tries too hard, that's all.
683225 Honestly didn't know that about Nightmare Moon. Well, thanks for the feedback!
que secret impossible stunt were the mane 6 are alive and tricked him then kill him
Well written, which was actually the problem people are having. I read cupcakes without problem (which isn't as bad as everyone makes it out to be) but I had to just start skipping about mid-way through this because I felt like puking. remember, one of the big reasons ponies is enjoyed by most is its innocence and such. that makes this like this magnified by preexisting feelings. it's like how if the victim is some guy people think that's bad, but the exact same happening to a cute little girl will make people recoil in shock. add that to your skill...yeah. though from what I did see when going through I think you did try a bit too hard. it seemed mainly based on cliches, intensified by the fact it was ponies.
and spike comes and saves the day
God you killed them all so terrible
I have to say, I love your work.
This is one of the better fanfics that I have read. I hope you do more writing similar to this, with less sexual content. Don't get me wrong, that fit into the story, but you should try writing a story with no sexual content. Your work with both Filly Fooling and Discord's Revenge is amazing. I look forward to more of your work in the future. 
No feature?
Just because a fan fic scares you too much doesn't mean you should Thumbs Down it! 
Considering how amazing it's written.
This story had potential. However, it was a bit too graphic and in my own opinion, nonchalant. The rape in the story was very unnecessary, although I've read worse. I don't mind the gore, though the sex? Try to tone it down in a less violent manner. I really like the story though. Thunbs up from me, but 3/5 stars also.
Oh man, that was seriously the most depraved thing I've read in a long time.The fact that it was coherent, grammatically correct, didn't alter anyone's personalities (aside from Discord going Saw 3 on everypony) were the only things that enabled me to read it all the way through. Although I did literally feel my heart start to rip itself out of my chest when he got to work on Twilight....yeesh. Man, I am SO glad I didn't eat anything before reading this. Other than that, great read!
I really didn't need any sleep tonight, thats ok. But really a great story! I'd love to see more of it!
Wasn't all that scary... I've seen far worse so I classified this as light grim dark.
It wasn't all that graphic, since some of the descriptions were just beating against the bush and evaded overall descriptions of the gore scenes. Plus, the drill kinda killed it for me since the world of Equestria clearly seems to be in the equivalent of the 17th century so drills didn't really exist back then.
Overall, this story wasn't really disturbing for me. Plus, the Discord featured in the story was clearly OOC so it also killed it for me.
excellent torture my friend, except with rushing fluttershy, appljack, pinky, and dash, i would've liked a little more creativity there but still enjoyed it
Anyone else turned on by the rape?
Why the fuck did I read this...
i threw up
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I hope you're kidding. If not, I'm sorry.
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dont worry just kidding, good descriptions though
Meh...
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Couldn't agree more. If the author wanted a reaction, he won't get one. 'Tis a silly story.
Hmmm, I feel nothing.
It was good, Seemed kind of forced ya know? Like you tried to hard for it to be over the top.