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OnyxFang


Sugarcoat is best human pony.

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Starlight Glimmer has nothing. No friends, no followers, no home, no job but she wants to keep trying to poison people's minds with her communist nonsense. So Twilight and her friends enlist three little ponies to help reform her.


Cover Art-http://miyaringo-sama.tumblr.com/post/118553823958/mlpfim-fanart-mlp-starlight-glimmer-eg-2-by
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Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Now this will be interesting... Hmhmmhm...

6503984 Thank You:twilightsmile:. I will make give you some more interesting stuff in the future.

Wow, this could be seen as being pretty mean there Twilight. Forcing her to help the Crusaders is a little low but yet poetic justice! Will be following this story!

Talk about cruel and unusual punishment. :applecry::unsuresweetie::scootangel: Go on, go on.

I only have two complaints. First is that one of the Crusaders says "Untie her mouth so she can give us her point of view", but they never let her do so, instead pulling their Crusader act. The second is that Starlight acts awfully surprised and confused to see a filly without a cutie mark, when it's fundamental knowledge that ponies start out without one. It's a bit like if I walked up to a ten-year old child and asked her how she managed to get so small. Well, you get my point, I hope.

This is interesting and could go pretty far, as long as you don't turn Starlight into a complete pushover. Remember that she is a smooth talker - she did put that whole town under her hoof as their "glorious leader" and got them to give up their cutie marks, and had the M6 buying into her lies until they found out what was going on, all without using magic. If anything, leaving her alone with three impressionable kids desperate for acceptance and belonging could be disastrous.

To everyone asking why she is confused about seeing a pony without a cutie mark then hold your horses (no pun intended). I will release a extra chapter which explains everything.

(Spoilers) This does not run with the canon of the latest episode, it is completely seperate and I truly loved that episode.

6505407 You know that they could easily shut her up again if she starts to turn them. You are also forgetting that the CMC know the Mane6 and will be warned by them about Starlights lies beforehand.

.......CMC teach Starlight about con of pure equality The potential is grand. .

As cool as that pic is my question is how is she using magic? She is human. Is no one else wondering this besides me?

Ouch only 1 chapter in and it already has 7 downvotes?

If they know they are already destined to help others find their Cutie Marks wouldn't they already have their Cutie Marks cause that happened in the episode. They decided to help other ponies find their Cutie Marks and they got theirs

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