jidbrony
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jidbrony
Just a man trying to make the Ultimate Who story along with his pals. Feel free to PM me if you wanna say hi.
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There's still the matter of Twi getting back at her brother.
6486259 Good point.
Aren't they a little young to be pulling epic pranks on their friends?
6486270 How about the old severed head trick via metal tray with lid a la Spike?
6486292 The real question is, are they a little young to be turning into demons
6486297
Unsure. May need a sequel
Haha
Shining, you better watch out! She-demons on the loose!
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PhineasTwilight: Yes. Yes we are.That was great.
Great story! But there were so many grammar errors, i couldnt count. Are you not english? Or are you still young?
Cuz you should probably work on your grammar buddy.
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And if it isn't, Author, if you see this: 
Oops.
Probably just lack of proofreading or editing.
6487174 Could be, but maybe he/she's just foreign and might not know English grammar that much.
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That's also a chance.
6487011 Nope I can speak perfect English ...I'm just lazy.
6487277 Lol, Yeah laziness!
Very fast reply too...
6487282 No problem.
6487289 This is the first story I read by you, and it seems very original. So Ima just go read your other stories.
6487302 Thanks you.
Love it also hope to read what happened to Shining when the two see him maybe have Cadence with him
More then a few extra strokes of the enter key in there by the looks of it.
ha nice.
Nice little story but it could do with a once over to fix any spelling and grammar errors.
For what it's worth, Shining Armour has it coming. Revenge is sweet, but never fattening. That said, Sunset and Twilight should be prepared for the Vengeance of Rainbow and Pinkie. It's likely to be something special now!
YES POWER ABSOLUTE POWER
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A few typos, but I like it.
That was a good halloween type story..
Interesting argument, here's my retort: Alucard from Hellsing Ultimate Abridged. Or even from the original Hellsing Ultimate.
Please do.
I swear I almost passed out from lack of air from laughing.
i read this story like 4or 5 times and it still funny
good job on making it
This was... not good. You really need an editor to help fix your numerous grammatical mistakes.
As an example, your punctuation dialogue was a mess.
"This is an example of correctly punctuated dialogue," said Bob.
"Oh, okay. So not like this?" Asked Billy.
"No, that's wrong. Do you understand now?" replied Bob.
"I think so," said Billy.
That was only one example of the issues in this story. Again, I'd recommend finding a good editor and cleaning up all of the grammatical issues here. If you do, you could actually have a decent and fun little story.
Some grammar errors, but the perfect amount of fun spookinating!
Sorry Dash, it will take a few more centuries before the Vampire genre can recover from that abomination that shares Twilight's name...
Nice work.
Are you going to a shinning's reaction to the prank?
Could I do Shinning's reaction?
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High school is the main years for pranks. However Sci-twi and Sunset shimmer are smart enough to be in college and that's the time for massive planned out pranks. The problem is only 20% ever succeed. 50% get caught and the 30% give up and forgets to clean up.
And 10/30 and 4/01 are the biggest days.
great fun!