Try again. Fail again. Fail better. (Ko-Fi / Tip Jar)
The nightmares were becoming frequent recently, but Sunset Shimmer had never faltered, however bad it could get.
Last night was the last straw.
With a bicycle, a map, a music player, a purse, a set of clothes and a conviction, she runs off into the night.
Knowing she could only run so far.
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Wow, really cute. Thanks for posting this, it was a great late night read.
Dang.
I can really feel Sunset's whirl of emotions here – partly because I've also had that desire to just scream at the universe, albeit without the recurring nightmare (usually) and isolated outdoor sanctuary. Excellent, powerful writing.
Aww, Sunny,
Short, but not rushed. Complex, but not pretentious. Brimming with emotion, but not ham-fisted in the slightest. Bravo, my friend. Bravo!
Poor girl has been through a lot, more than most could ever relate to. Hang in there, Sunset, you're gonna be okay. Those scars will fade.
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Love to hear that you guys had a good time reading it as I did writing it!
Also, if you liked the song, do check out the rest of this band's work. This band deserves to be noticed!
She doesn't have to pay for her mistakes...Because she already did
Gather around children, and let me tell you the legend of the banshee in Lake Canter...
Love the story!
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Seconded! The part at the end was beautifully crafted and filled me full of envy. Well done!
This was really deep. Brought out a lot of inner feelings and a side of Sunset I've always liked. Thank you for writing this. Wonderful job.
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Glad to hear that!
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Dude, you've got me hooked on the song to the point I had to put it in my playlists and also download it onto my phone, desktop computer and laptop.
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In all seriousness though, I'm glad you enjoyed the song! Still one of my favourites even after all these years, so I'm right there with you.