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This story is a sequel to Forever This Second
Prodding from peers and her highest instructor led Twilight Sparkle to release all the magic she had stolen. What it would do was beyond her, a simple human facing down what was not of her own world. Her research in these matters ran deep; but theory was brought to reality in that one moment.
It was discourse that brought her there, and discourse that filled her mind for the first time.
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Wow...deep.
There going to be a third one with the magic talking to Sunset and Twilight as they change back?
Sweet, was hoping you do this.
6517301 Maybe.
This makes a great partner story to Forever This Second.
The portion of dialogue with the essence describing all that has been done with the power was very well written. It felt like the weight of centuries backed those words.
6517301 I think it would be called "Second This Forever" or something like that.
Discourse? Are you sure that's the word you want?
Vein.
Gym "Unless there's something about wind that I'm missing..." Quirk
Well, this is absolutely chilling. Your use of descriptions and juxtapositions: in awe; in fear... in fear; in awe. They are absolutely stunning!
Wonderful.
Need a sequel to the sequel now.
6604664 Get out of here, Revan. You lost!
6604668 Ah, but that's where you're wrong. I come back multiple times, and you'll never know for sure whether I've left for good.
Man, that voice is incredibly condescending.
When it couldn't come up with a flaw in Twilight's state of mind, it just resorted to vague pity.
6699106 Because the flaw was stated right away. The voice genuinely feels bad for everything.
6699556
...Which Twilight refuted quite well, I thought. I especially thought this was a nice quote:
Though Twilight's point about inner conflict was quite well-stated, too.
It seemed Twilight quite handily came out on top in that exchange. The entire exchange, in fact.
6699669 Just because someone can quickly defend themselves doesn't mean they believe what they're saying or that they actually feel that way. Sometimes it's just trying to convince others that they are in fact in control or fully sure of what they're doing.
You're free to defend Twilight in this case however you want. It really makes no difference considering the final product. But, thank you anyway for drawing meaning from the story.
Really interesting take on the elements "consiussnes", it has been explored before but never done this masterfully a really great trilogy