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Fifty Shades of Yellow


Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.

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- Shifting Second Person Point of View -
While her friends go outside, you will have to watch over Fluttershy during Nightmare Night. You warned Twilight about your relation with Fluttershy, since it isn't enjoyable, let alone bearable, but she has proposed you a good pay if you do take care of her for the night.

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I must say it's very interesting,
I will ask the obvious question....... will you make a sequel?

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Good question, really. This was made for last Hallowe'en, so there will be a fresh one for this year. Also, I'm not entirely sure that there will be a connection between the two.

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This was made for a group of fellows on which where the concept was that Fluttershy is obsessive over Anon (who isn't interested in ponies) and tries to get him one way or another.

I hope the two aren't connected. While I did enjoy this it was a bit too clunky for me to want a sequel.

I wish there was so much more to this.

It was difficult to tell which dialog belongs to who, please work on that.

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Done, although I couldn't find a suitable colour scheme for Diamond Tiara and the CMC.

All i can say of the picture of fluttershy is this *ahem* "HELLO NURSE!!!"

Hahahah banana!!!

okay, I saw a story here, But what the fuck was that cohesion, halfway through you drop Fluttershy and go straight to a completely different idea that honestly would have had a way better pay off had it been cohesive, gotta give this a coconut/mouse, not a coconut/bananna. enjoyable if I just wanna turn my brain off.

V8

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yeah cause she's yellow. You might as well call Twilight an eggplant.

That was good but wish there was a sequel

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