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Fifty Shades of Yellow


Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.

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Being the only human would have been a great perk, but not when they abolish you as some sort of alien. You overlook the time that you have been here and ponder your next move, only to be interrupted by Princess Luna who will show you a possible future caused by your actions.

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Why is there no human tag?

Anyne #3 · Jul 5th, 2015 · · 12 ·

At least a changed diet was created for you

BECAUSE EATING MEAT IS EVIL! EVEN THOUGH FLUTTERSHY FEEDS HER ANIMALS MEAT BUT THAT'S DIFFERENT! FUCK, THIS HUMAN IS SUCH A MONSTER AND DESERVES THE HATRED THE PONIES GIVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!

I'd like to see a sequel to see how things pan out, to see if the ponies stop being inconsiderate pricks and how they react when they find out that the MC planned to kill himself.

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That was sarcasm

Luna's help seems flimsy. She knows whats going on, but does nothing to actually make things better. The Mane 6 can eat a dick (except for pinkie) because they never gave a shit when it actually mattered.

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Glad someone seems to realize it.

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How about we eat you.

I say kill all ponies than!

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Even after all that I'd still put a bullet in my head

You wake up on your bed and look around.

Moonbutt was probably making shit up. *suicides anyway*

Hmm I would still kill myself right where everyone can see it so they would know. IT'S THEIR FAULT, cuz when Luna showed me those visions, I would be like "Well how about I make those events play out???"

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Well, it's not like you'd get to enjoy it. Because your dead ass will be dead.

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That's until they revive me

Wait, Luna can control dreams, so was what she showed him what she thought would happen or would that really happen?

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It honestly depends on what you believe, some say that the future (or possible Futures) can be seen through the minds eye. So it is entirely possible that what she showed him was a future based on what actions he took.

The spark spell she will work on will save more lives.
Surprisingly, you managed to write a story in which everyone will really benefit from this

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Hmm I would still kill myself right where everyone can see it so they would know. IT'S THEIR FAULT, cuz when Luna showed me those visions, I would be like "Well how about I make those events play out???"

YES! Thank you.

I guarantee you that when he went to work....Nothing changed because people don't change. Besides, I don't believe Luna at all. I don't believe she actually showed what would actually have happened. Don't get me wrong, I believe her heart was in the right place, but I don't believe for a second what she showed him was in any way real. I would have woken up, read the note, replied to it with a thank you to Luna, then blown my brains out. I think Knight Breeze said it best.

Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze

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Spite could mean two things

Killing yourself out of spite just to cause them the pain they'll suffer.
Or living out of spite.

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There is a great picture on the internet of a crane eating a frog, but the frog is choking the bird out at the same time. I think thats the best example of

Or living out of spite.

Ive ever seen. (but to be honest, I can't remember this story and need to re listen to it.)

Monk

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Exactly, nothing that was said solves his immediate issue. She only showed that they would have regrets when the consequences are shown.

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