Anon the Scrooge

- Shifting Second Person Point of View -
Everyone in school is preparing for the holidays. Everyone, except you. The seven girls try to unravel the mystery and try to cheer you (Anon) up.

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Chapter 1 · 26th Dec 2016 · 1,463 words
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Chapter 2 · 3rd Jan 2017 · 1,233 words
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Chapter 3 · 27th Jan 2017 · 1,851 words
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Mallory S Nocturne

Mallory S Nocturne #1 · Dec 26th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Wait, whose POV was that? It's kinda confusing...

Fifty Shades of Yellow

Fifty Shades of Yellow #2 · Dec 26th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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It started off with Sunset, then it went to Twilight when they split up, and then back to Sunset after Twilight was done.

Cuber Snuggles

Cuber Snuggles #3 · Dec 27th, 2016 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Please in the next chapter be more clear about that. Maybe some sort of indicator? Example: (PoV: Sunset Shimmer)

Fifty Shades of Yellow

Fifty Shades of Yellow #4 · Jan 3rd, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Sure, I will keep that in mind. Thank you for the idea, and there you are. Chapter 1 is now fixed with the issue.

Cuber Snuggles

Cuber Snuggles #5 · Jan 4th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I understand that Anon wants to keep things to himself, but...WHY THE COOKIES!? WHY ANON, WHY!? *clears throat* I mean, if I was Anon, I would at least keep them instead of destroying them. He better have a good reasoning behind that.

Thanks for taking my advice on the first chapter, made it much easier to understand who was who. Or would it be who I was?

Anyways, keep up the good work!

Sunbro4life

Sunbro4life #6 · Jan 12th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

There is a anon tag now

Even Evil Has Standards

Even Evil Has Standards #7 · Jan 27th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Silent Echo

Silent Echo #8 · Jan 27th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Poor anon thats so cruel.

VexEffects

VexEffects #9 · Feb 2nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

7901550 I feel like if we find out more has happened to him it can justify what his done a bit more because if it was just like this every christmas your still the one in the wrong doing what his been doing

Tvrocker

Tvrocker #10 · Apr 20th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

I don't care if his family locked him outside during Christmas if someone told me some asshat sprayed his own piss at them I would flip shit at him, he would literally never piss again (or walk for that matter)

JadeFox

JadeFox #11 · Apr 27th, 2018 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

This is really crap. I don't feel bad for anon in the slightest bit.

Matthew Stone

Matthew Stone #12 · Dec 5th, 2018 · · · Chapter 3 ·

I'd be more inclined to feel sympathy for him if he didn't just shoot a water gun full of his own piss at them. So it kinda kills any sympathy you're supposed to have for him.

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