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You are the new student at Canterlot High School. It may seem like a really nice school on the surface, however, what lies inside that school is a ruthless bully named Sunset Shimmer. On your first day at that school, you and her cross paths and she decides to make you her main target of her cruelty. Unbeknownst to her, you're a lot more clever than she thinks you are. You just might be her most difficult target out of anyone at CHS.
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In the art above it looks like she was slapped on the face very hard. Looks like it hurt to.
And I hate it! I mean are you even listening to yourself? I am the all mighty and powerful Sunset Shimmer!
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Yeah, and I made quite a fool of myself for thinking that i could take that Sunset down.
How could he have been sick during the week of the fall formal when the portal opened on his second day? Also, Sunset decided to just leave him alone and not reach out to him sooner? Still him getting sick during those events is too convenient to be that believable. I get this fic is more comedic, but it should still flow logically and still have a logical basics to it.
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Oh. Of course. Your the Anon.
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Well, sort of. I know that I don't like burger patties held together with cinnamon rolls instead of regular buns. Ew.
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Yeah, it definitely could have had a better flow since I squeezed continuity from the first two movies into it. I'll make sure not to miss that again, thanks.
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Well. I need help with making a story. Can you help me?
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Uh, sure. What do you have in mind for this story?
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sounds good. I did manage to enjoy some parts of this, mainly Sunset lusting over getting pictures of his body and her offering to have him be her prince. I kind of want another fic like this, but where she actually ends up falling for the oc or anon or whoever leading to humor that way.
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Botr vs drones and the top 6 need help from Shimmer but she is at hippogrith island.
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If I do make a story like that, I'll see if I can make it other than an Anon and a Second Person story. I laid off the romance for this one since I'm also working on a series called "Anon's Most Anxious Saga" on this site that will have plenty of romance moments with Sunset and Anon, and I wanted a bit of variety for other stories involving them. I already finished my first entry in that series.
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chat.
Wow. Im not really into romance yet. But if u need help you know who to
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Ooh, that sounds like a pretty big idea. I see that you're a newcomer to this site, so I would recommend starting off with something smaller. For me, I don't think I'd be much help since I already have another big story in the works that revolves around the multiverse. So, I'm sorry.
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Ok no problem.
Why aren’t there more stories like this?
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Thanks. Which part of the story stood out to you?
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The part where the character didn’t follow the crowd. Not only did he stand up for himself, but he also called out the school and sunset. Usually stories with bully sunset involves her just bullying someone and not doing anything and when she reforms they either forgive her or is forced to forgive her by others.
For a very short fic, it went pretty well and hillarious. Any plans for a sequel? Because I wouldn't mind to read how Anon takes the Dazzlings with his cleverness.
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Probably no sequels for this since it's just a short story, but something similar to this with the Dazzlings may be a good idea.
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Indeed it may would be a good idea. Think about it.
This is a great story. The writing is fantastic and it does sound like something that would happen off camera (?) in the Equestria Girl movie series. Anon is a badass. I like the beginning where the new kid is acting like it's practically April Fools everyday to Sunset and tries to reason with her when reaching to the end. There's so much more that I want to say but can't think of other than this is a great story :D
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Thank you. I think my favorite part would have to be the ending because from someone else's perspective that didn't write this story, it was an unpredictable joke.
It just ends like that?
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Yeah, it just ends like that and was intentionally meant to. I was originally going to have Anon be dragged by an angry Vice Principal Luna to her office after hearing him swear, but I scrapped that idea and went with this one because of how random and bizarre it was.
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Sequel? I wouldn't want to end it like that lol
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Probably no sequels. But, maybe some more stories with ideas based on this story. All it was is just a short story.
And I think it's a good ending. A very weird and unusual fourth wall breaking ending, too.
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He’s not wrong.
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Now that Anon essentially beat her and she's made it clear she finds him attractive, he needs to just date her and bang her. It's only appropriate.
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LOL
Who knows if Sunset still has a thing for Anon? Maybe she wants to go back and make things right with Flash.
Kidding aside, it looks like some people want me to make a sequel to this story. One that involves the Dazzlings and Anon possibly wanting to date Sunset. I was not going to make a sequel to this, but I guess if people want me to, then why not? I'll start brainstorming ideas for a short story sequel to this.
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Well, you're the author but Sunset liked being challenged on the same level as her. She finds Anon attractive, enough that she essentially proposed to him towards the end and happily embraced him as 'her guy" so to speak. I mean, why not? She is indeed hot and no longer evil. It would be fun to read. It's your call. It was a good story nonetheless.
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Thanks. I actually think I have an idea for that story. But, I'm not going to start off with Anon falling for Sunset out of nowhere because it wouldn't be very consistent with him already finding Sunset a crazy person, along with her friends too. I'll also try to throw in the Dazzlings somewhere, but it would need to take place after Rainbow Rocks since this story already stated that it takes place after the first and second movie.
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By the way, if you want to see plenty of romance moments between Anon and Sunset, I recommend giving my first fanfic on this site a read.
Anon just casually wears a brick suit 🤣
This fic was so funny! good job!
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Thank you. There are some people who want me to make a sequel to this, and I will get around to it to explain about that little brick suit detail.
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I honestly wouldn’t mind a sequel. The story is very unique.
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Don't worry, there will be. I'm currently back to work on my bigger stories, along with a sequel to this. I know I haven't been uploading any new stories for two months, but that was because I wanted to just make a couple of short stories and then take a break while brainstorming ideas for the other sequel I'm working on.
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Awesome! I’m excited.
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That's nice to hear. Thank you. 🙂
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You’re very welcome.
ingenioso con el apellido eh
I can't stop imagining Anon with a cockney accent because of this
I love it
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We need more stories like that.
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Amazing