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Ribe_FireRain


Mental instability at its finest and aspiring punk rock musician. PS: Buy a creator a coffee to keep him awake? https://ko-fi.com/firerain

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MayCee has been feeling ill for a while, and his results came back positive. He was diagnosed with an incurable form of leukemia that not even magic can help defeat, leaving him crushed and devastated as it leaves him with only weeks left to enjoy his time in Equestria.

MayCee thinks about those who matter to him the most, those who's lives he had settled into and found comfort, kindness, warmth and friendship in. With this new and terrifying turn of events dragging him down, he decides to finally open up to a certain yellow mare, and he is intent on asking her of one last, nerve-racking favour to fulfill his wishes before his time is up.

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Featured: 20 / 02 / 2019

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Comments ( 15 )

I though there was a 🅱️enis on the thumbnail.

Just a little thing here to fix:

his results came back negative

Negative would mean nothing was wrong. Positive is when the diagnosis comes back with an illness.

Good story!

My grandmother is actually going through kemo right now. What she had is treatable, but not curable. She won't be with us for much longer. So I could really feel this as I read it.
Good on you, buddy. You did great work here. Keep it up.

This had a perfect mixture of romance, sadness, and slice of life. Beautiful story, and it belongs in my Favourites.

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Where is that error? I looked up and down multiple times and missed it. Must have accidentally overlooked it. Now I feel stupid...

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In the story description, that's what Roselucky pointing out

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Ah. Well, no wonder I didn't see it! Too much rushing about and fretting about making sure my spellings were correct before I submitted the story! Lesson learned, I suppose. :derpytongue2:

Damn.... very nicely done. You get a like and a favorite off me. If you could make a sequel, a follow up on this. Places Liam Maycee and Fluttershy went to that would be sweet. Plus I really am curious as to how the rest are going to react to his illness. And when he dies. What happens after that etc... sorry, my mind tends to think things like that when I read a story like this. Seriously though good job.

Damn, this tugs at my heart strings!

This almost made me cry, and only my little dashie made me do that! Good work

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My deepest sympathies. I also have a close relationship to my own grandmother, so your comment really strikes a note with me. All I can say is stay close and be there for her as much as you can. Make every second count, leave no regrets. 💛

Pretty fantastic. It was like a roller coaster with ups and down. Jam packed with both cute and sad moments throughout. Thank you for this story.

The story turned out to be of high quality and emotional. But two weeks to travel in Equestria is not enough. They will pass 2 or 3 cities.

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