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This story is a sequel to The Twilight of Her Singularity


Princess Celestia and Princess Twilight Sparkle are very excited. After more than a few misses, Twilight is now close to the end of her first pregnancy. The happy couple couldn’t feel more blessed than they are now.

When Twilight goes for a check up, she receives news that she wasn't quite ready for and begins to question if she is prepared to raise their foal. What if she does something wrong? What will she do?

She fears her foal will never want to call her mom.

*Comments contain spoilers*

Written for the Eighth Twilestia contest

Edited by Zodiac

Reading The Twilight Of Her Singularity is encouraged but not required.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 59 )

Twilight Everfree? And an Earth pony? who's line has an earth pony in it;s line? Not my thing.

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I'm sorry you don't like it. As for your questions Everfree is Celestia's last name. As for who has Earth pony? well Celestia is a alicorn so shes 1/3 earth pony.

I enjoyed reading this.

6455195 so then is twilight still a unicorn in this fic or is she also an alicorn?

What if the baby calls the mom dad? :rainbowderp:

Cool fic.

This was interesting.

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Both of them are alicorns.

6455256 He asked because you said Celestia was 1/3 earth pony as an alicorn but didn't mention Twilight. Thereby implying that she wasn't an alicorn and thus part earth pony.

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Apologies yeah both are alicorns. My mind was just focused on the fact Twilight was born unicorn.

I think this is the start of a sweet and interesting story. I'll be watching for more.

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Actually, given that the Journal of the Two Sisters states that Alicorns have the three different types of pony in them (Earth, Pegasus and Unicorn), they both have Earth pony blood in them.

It might actually imply, in Foals' universe, that the alleles for earth pony might be slightly more dominant. And given we know next to nothing canonically about Twilight's extended family, nor Celestia's parents, we don't know anything about their lineage to be able to say.


Two things I wonder, 6455195: where did Everfree as the last name come from? I don't recall seeing that in Canon material. Also, is Twilight equally immortal as Celestia is in this story?

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This is a in the future story of my other Twilestia The Twilight of her Singularity about 10 years or so in the future I gave Tia the last name of Everfree there and yes Twilight is just as immortal as Celestia.

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*notices the sequel note*

Le sigh. I am derp.

What if Twilight goes crazy and invents a working horn for her son?

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This story is a sequel to The Twilight of Her Singularity

At the end of that story (before it went on hiatus), weren't Twilight and Celestia thinking of adopting Eclipse? Did that not work out, was it one of the "few misses" mentioned in the description, or will this now give the couple a second foal to care for?

Huh, first time I've seen an apparently incomplete story get a sequel, what with the hiatus tag on the predecessor. Weird.

Also, that picture is very disturbing to me. Stomach is freakishly huge. Looks like the final panel of vore porn.

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No worries Eclipse is still there she'll be in epilogue ^^

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Pregnancy I assure you. As for The Twilight Of Her Singularity. I took down the last chapter to rewrite it before my shoulder injury got as bad as it is. I'm slowly working on it and it'll be put back up then.

LIFEHACK
STEP 1: ORDER PIZZA
STEP 2: PIZZA DELIVERY PIZZA GUY COMES WITH PIZZA
STEP 3: KILL PIZZA GUY, AND GET FREE PIZZA

REPEAT

“As long as he lives, He will always call you Mom.”
And then Twilight realized she's going to watch him die and broke down all over again.

I like the idea that Twilight and Celestia's child could be an earth pony as the magic used to from it could of caused the change as they are both female and the magic need to fuel the pregnancy caused the child to lack it's own. Well written and love the story.

Oh my goodness! This is delightful.

6455195 considering that this is a sequel to "The Twilight of her Singularity" it looks like Eclipse is going to have a little sibling. By the way, are you going to continue Singularity? Edit: Just read your other comments. Hope you feel better soon.

Loving this so far. Fave and upvote.:pinkiehappy:

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Oh yes not to worry. Just need to rewrite the wedding chapter now that I actually have the time. And don't worry Eclipse will be in the epilogue.

6473351 that's good to hear. Thank you for the rapid reply.

i like it and i hope theres a sequel to this sequel

Awww so cute! I think i will be trying to draw a fan pic soon!

Simply beautiful, Foals!

Quite sweet, and twilight's fears were refreshingly... realistic. And Twilight, to paraphrase the Doctor from 'The Magician's Apprentice', "He's got a ninety-seven in one-hundred chance of being an alicorn filly. Ignore the ninety-seven and focus on the three!"

In fac,t Pinkie Pie had been escorted out of the room no less than five times in the last thirty minutes.

First off, I think that comma's misplaced. Second off, *Slaps Pinkie* BAD PINKIE!

*Ahem* Okay, little confused here. If this is twilight and Celestia's first kid... where did those others come from in the first paragraphs? Eclipse, mentioned as twilight's daughter? Is there time travel or something here?

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Eclipse is adopted she became Twilight's student in Twilight of her singularity and they went on to adopt her

6475983 :twilightsmile: Yeah speaking of which you need to finish Singularity. Can't wait for that one.

who is Eclipse where did she come from?

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She appears in the chapter Yourself or somepony like you. in my prequel story The Twilight Of Her Singularity.

Morning Star. So she just gave birth to the antichrist. :ajbemused:

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Actually The Morning Star is more often refrencing Jesus Christ in the bible not Lucifer.
Does Morning Star mean Lucifer or Jesus
...Not to say he is jesus either.
He is named Morning Star because he was born at Dawn

6477704 oh ok X3

i just work out who you are and I'm reading Mother again X3

Ha ha ha. Guess what the Devils name is? Lucifer. Which means (BTW) morning star. I'm just... Saiyan. Great story tho. Just thought you'd like to know you named the kid satan.

She she sat on a bench to watch the foals play.

Twilight tried to imagine it what would he be like.

Run-on sentence? This would work:

Twilight tried to imagine it. What would he be like?

I love his name that Twilight Sparkle gave to him:twilightblush:

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Read the prequels

Embedding illustrations from Imgur.com no longer works.

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Is it a three, though?

Alicorn(97) + Unicorn(1) + Pegasus(1) + Earth Pony(1) = 100.

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Is it terrible that I have read the prequels, and I don't remember?

Short but sweet =3

Like the name Morning Star =3

7070929 a student who flared like Twilight that Twilight met while she was in Celestia's body for a day.

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