Derpy is a loving sister, a sweet marefriend, and over all a nice pony. She loves the Doctor, and all of his inventions. One morning, she 'accidentally' activates a spying device, and temptation casts its spell on her...
Join Derpy as she sees the princesses, the mane six, and all of Ponyville when they think they're alone... Mwahaha...
I love it, and you will too.
Great story!!
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Butter!
"Mmmm," I thought out loud, "No one makes muffins like Pinki-," I stopped dead" That was funny!
You got an thumps up from me!
Choose the one with rainbow frosting, it's freshly baked
This. Is. Fantastic!
I'm becoming more and more of a
rabidfan of Doctor Who, is I might as well read this.I'm going to guess there's still a bit of 9th Doctor in him.
... What? It's so meta that I can't believe it.
Hm, alrighty then. Not bad of a story, I'd say. A cool concept, for sure. But, I think you could have done better. Sure, how you portrayed
DerpyDitzy is pretty alright and all, but I think you could have maybe fleshed her interaction between her and the Doctor. There are also some grammatical errors in there as well. But, these are just my thoughts.Cute story!