Cakes, presents, and special guests, oh my! Celestia's birthday is being celebrated with clear skies and fun times! However, one should keep their eyes peeled - on such a special day, something is bound to go wrong.
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Alt. Title: Happy Birthday To You! A Million Ponies Everyday Are Starving In The Street!
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The monkeys in Canterlot are gonna cook our goose. Their finger's on the button, all they need is an excuse.
1782936 Duck and cover.
The LOL... it's over 9!
1783299 Alright! Nailed the 11 mark!
1783448 Over 9? Or 9,000?
YOU BROKE MY MOON!
Died there. Very cute story XD
Gift idea:
A pink Celestia doll that talks when the cutiemark is pressed.
PS: is altering the past that way allowed?
Yes... It was an emergency, but still.
Talk about trying to get a gift for the mare who has everything. Maybe a bulk package of ponystation 3 controllers for when Luna breaks them. Luna is easy -- a video game gift card to ponyzon games.
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That gift could work! As for the altering? Just gonna go with the logic that it wasn't a solid point in time (aka the actual FiM story line) for Equestria and other effected planets, thus the change wasn't going to cause the universe to explode. Could be debated, but I wouldn't take it seriously. Is just a comedy fic after all.
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Hm... Could be one of the left over presents that didn't get opened! Or could be left for if I ever decide to do a Luna B-day story.
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Decided to change it from "PlayStallion" to "PonyStation" as well. Stallion sounded better to me at the time, but for some reason I just didn't register that title wouldn't make the console sound very gender friendly.
People?
Also, I'd have hit enter after each gift to make it look more like a list than a big wall of text.
"Thou" is "you," so it makes no sense here.
Just a few things I noticed. Clean this up a bit and you have something good.
PlayStallion sounds like an equestrianized version of Playboy....
Also, gift-wise?
For Celestia: A fully custom sun-themed Raven Hollowbody acoustic/Electric guitar[a rare vintage guitr of japanese origin]
For Luna: Black Ops 2 and a shipping crate full of controllers, for the inevitable controller-chucking.
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Good catches!
Fixed em up. I actually caught myself on using people for ponies before but some how skipped that one. Fully changed the second part. You where right on the list too so I changed that as well.
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IKR?! But I think I'll add the guitar in the list!
The second I read the words "a male figure" I knew who it was.
Story version is already up to 1.05!
Added a couple more gifts.
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And YOU... Have a cookie!
1792400 WOOT! Celly's gettin' a guitar, baby!
1791780 Indeed. Though given how female-dominated pony society is, I imagine Playmare being more popular.
1797949 it is a matriachal society, so, yeah, I wouldn't be shocked that they'd have porn FOR women before porn OF women.....
unless the majority of mares are bisexual.
The title of the story had been changed to sound less like a Bill Engvall sort of spin off. Don't get me wrong, I love the guy. I just felt this would be the better title.
This story was funny, well written, and reminds me you're worth watching.
AHEM. Ponies.
But aside of that, Celestia got a Portal Gun? I WANT IT!
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A people mistake? Again? Really?
FIXED.
But thank you!
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I always thought it was haystation.
also for a gift how about a brony.
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Added!
I changed out just a few gifts to drop this stories rating down to Everyone.
Not bad. Made me laugh a few times. The ending was particularly interesting. I'm not usually a fan of Doctor Whooves, but it worked here.
That said, there were a few errors:
aren't, gifts
Gold
I really don't know what this word is.
Additionally, the section where all the gifts were being named off was incredibly boring. There were a few amusing entries, but I found it tedious.
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I have failed at my spell checking! Grammarcy should have been Gramercy, the renaissance sort of way of saying "Thank you".
Whoops!
Soooo... Gramercy for the catches! Always love a helping hand!
Sorry the list didn't click for ya. Wasn't sure of a better way to go about it.
My idea with creating the massive list was to give the reader not only a good perspective on how overwhelming the stack was to the princesses, but to also plant a very small chance for the reader to be able to figure out what was causing the problem. That is if they desired to backtrack and try and figure it out before reading the ending. It's listing is vague, but it's still there to say that I'm not trying to completely cheat the reader out.