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Fair, but I reckon you should put a space between paragraphs and do a quick editing sweep. I spotted a few flaws here and there, but am to lazy to go back and point them out.
Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and....Foxtrot? Uhhhh no offense but....HAHAHAHAHAHA
Looking forward to this story, I wonder what the expressions would be on the rest of the Mains' faces when they see someone killed, or worse, FlutterShy killing someone>
...Octavia is a unicorn?
MOAR.
"FoxTrot" does not need to be capitalized as such. Foxtrot or Fox Trot works just as well.
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FoxTrot is his name. Much like AppleBloom and other ponies without spaces.
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Apple Bloom's name is two words. Why would they capitalize another letter in the middle of the name? That's just silly.