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After not receiving an immediately reply from her mentor, Twilight decided to kill some time and head to her friend Moondancer's party. She wasn't annoyed though; after all, the Princess has dozens of duties to perform, and even more responsibilities! It wouldn't be fair for Twilight expect to just skip to the front of the line. Besides, it wouldn't change too much if she sent her response an hour or so later. Would it?

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So what do we call this new mane six? The Pre-mane six

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I should probably mention that this isn't the story of a new set of elements. Though I understand why the original picture that i had on this story might've made you think that

TrebleBass i got a question when will more chapters for this story come out

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How about, the Unicorn Six, cause if you look closely, all of them are unicorns, except Spike but Spike doesn't count.

This is fantastic. Can't wait for the next one!

Interesting. I'd like to see more.

"No shipping" THANK GOD !!

Interesting. I'll give you an upvote.

My face scrunched up a little bit as I decided to have a word with Twilight in regards to younger siblings and heights. However, that thought was put on the backburner as I remembered a very important matter.

The treehouse that was also a library.

I love this line, right here.

An interesting new take on mlp. I wonder about this type of situation but never seen anyone write it and my own writing abilities are nothing to talk about.
I look forward to how Moondancer's presence will change the elements bonding. Will she be left over? That one of the other slots or be a seventh element (a little over done the last one and not always well)? My personal wish is her to to have an plane necklace that represents balance (not an element in it own right but the interactions and use of the other six. It would fit in my opinion with you writing her as more aware and understanding of others personalities. She also has more human like common sense compared to cannon Mlp ponies. (A different universe with aspects and expression such as a one like Equestria would operate differently to ours and therefore the inhabitants would think differently to.us.
Regardless enjoying the story and looking forward to the next instalment.

Meanwhile, inside the Library....
...Pinkie still awaits.

Comment posted by RomaTsarenko deleted Oct 11th, 2022

Hello! Will be new chapter?

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