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BrawnyBold


Is it wrong to think Cadence is best princess? Is it wrong to think Feather Bangs is best pony? I certainly don't think so.

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After a long time of fighting villains, learning new lessons, and saving Equestria many times, Princess Twilight was ready to teach friendship to the next generation. After an unexpected incident, she chose four ponies as her students in hopes of teaching them valuable lessons. However, Twilight faces a large challenge as these ponies have different traits that will cause problems to her. The four ponies will soon realize what it means to have the magic of friendship from the Princess of Friendship herself.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 11 )

So far, this story is pretty good. You may want to consider a proofreader- there are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing too huge.
My rating for this chapter-
7/10

Wow, even better than the first chapter!
8.5/10

Okay, I loved this chapter. Guide Light is amazing.
9.7/10

I think the rest of the chapter wasn't supposed to be in italics, but good plot line.
9.5/10

Comment posted by BrawnyBold deleted Mar 16th, 2016

Still an awesome story. :twilightsmile:
9.9/10

6491307 No problem... I'd just like to know one thing- is there a set schedule for this story, or do you just write when you have the free time? Just curious. :twilightsheepish:

6504829 Ah, that's what I do as well. I look forward to more! :raritywink:

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