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This is the clean version, some strong language, and suggested themes.

Rainbow Dash has crossed the line, and done things so horrible, that Pinkie Pie must bring her to justice.

Inspired on the Tumblr Blog, Ask Pinkamina Diane Pie.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )
#1 · Nov 16th, 2011 · · ·

where is the non-clean version?

#2 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

this is the first scootabuse related fic I've read that i liked.:pinkiehappy: mostly because rainbow got what was coming to her.:pinkiecrazy:

#3 · Dec 15th, 2011 · · ·

assholeassholeassholeasshole author:flutterrage::twilightangry2::ajbemused:pinkie just CAN'T take peaguas wings from rainbow dash,
if you want punish,just kill her in painless way!F**K

what happen to dash? :unsuresweetie:

what happen to dash? :unsuresweetie:

332012 SHES DEAD THAT WHERE THE MEAT IS FROM!!DUHHH

Well that was certainly very interesting. Read this at 4:30 AM or so; took forever to get to sleep. kept explaining this dude --> :pinkiecrazy: to pop out at me. But seriously, how can you think someone this cute (my profile pic) <-- could be guilty of something like that?

I want sequel/prequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::scootangel:

4102622 Sorry, this was a one-shot proof-of-concept. I felt bad about how much I was ragging on the original Cupcakes, and decided to prove i could do better. This kinda story is not to my taste, although the song/dance scene was one of my favorites.:pinkiehappy::rainbowderp:

332012 :coolphoto:Dash is dead, babe. Dash is dead.

4107268 :applecry:

Oh well. It was a great story, nevertheless!

An interesting fic, but I can assure you that anyone who uses the phrase

It was a dark and stormy night. No, wait... It was a bright and clear, moonlit night. Yes, that’s how it happened,

will never be taken seriously as a writer. I like how you left the nature of Rainbow Dash's punishment ambiguous. That kind of thing is always more terrifying (and therefore more effective) when left to the reader's imagination.

5517556 If you haven't noticed, I've never really tried being serious, or taken serious. :pinkiecrazy:

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