Rainbow Dash had finally got tickets to see the Wonderbolts perform, the best part the whole day she would have spent it with the one she loves the most. Underline Would.
She's fallen Ill, to sick to move and by her side is her girlfriend.
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Love's always in season and love is love. The world is changing and everyone has a view.
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Eh, A couple of glaring mistakes, but still it was very cute!
You abused the use of 'ill', but other than that, it was good! I'ma upvote.
~Wywint
How did she use her phone in the damn shower!!??
6285098 It were on the side so she leaned out and answered it...
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6285472 I had no idea there were a song called Down with the Sickness. Mind you am more into this kind of music then pop so I'm surprised that I haven't heard this before
When I put my distaste for anthro aside, I can most fairly say that this fic suffered somewhat because of its length, and because of the lack of depth. The other aspects of writing are satisfactory
Aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww
Get up come on get 'down with the sickness!' Get up come on get 'down with the sickness!' Open up your hate, and let into flow into me!!
6285472 oh wow I commented that now I saw this lol great minds think alike
6285472 That is the exact thing I thought of when I saw the title!!!
awww...,
that was cute, NOT the best fics ever, mind you, but still nice.
and your never going to believe this, but only 1 day before I read this, I wrote a fanfic (not on my account) where the two main characters were princess cadence and shining armor, but the plot was basically the same! (shining armor playing rainbow Dash's role in this one) but mine was over 5,000 words long.
funny huh?...
see ya!
The title of this story is also the name of the rock band's, Disturbed,song "Down With the Sickness".