A massive war breaks out between Alicorns and chaos bringers for the fate of equastria but the magic of all these powerful beings shake another world where a human will brought in between this war and risk his life to further protect the princess of equestria stuck there for the rest of his life he will easily comfort himself but as time goes on he will soon learn of true bond between him and Luna and face dark times.
PS. does merg with ink roses storys large portions are her words and I just added in my own story so I thank her and give her credit for the majority of the story.
Chapters (5)
OH COME ON!!! Where is the sequel. sorry for sounding rude but.... I wan't to see a sequel so badly man. PLEASE CAN YOU WRITE A SEQUEL. I BE OF YOU
I'm not the one who edite yes I did write I have Someone else edit it please forgive for any mistakes that will be fixed and yes there more of the story and jerry is not a chactars another mistake editing I'm going to find a new editor that name was just a joke that my friend put in I should have all done tonight sorry for the mistakes
not bad
Hey come on guys we all make mistakes
I love how this story is developing. ITS SO AWESOME. You must how the touch, you described the scenes very well because its like watching a movie inside my head. hence why its so awesome.
). IF i have free time i might fix the story for you 
Keep up with your awesome talent
P.S I might help you edit some of your chapters but currently my exams are due very soon (ITS THE END OF THE WORLD
NO you can't end the story like that
There must be more NOOOO
6333830 its not over it was just on pause
6665504 I know
, yeah dude/gal what do you do? Like are you are writer, a pre-reader or an editor?
6665824 Pre reader/co editor
6678851 That's nice to know I am a pre-reader and a somewhat editor
You know, are you currently editing stories or pre-reading stories?
6678903 Pre reading the next chapter
Only positive comments! Well, must be a pretty awe...
Oh, half of them are deleted. I get it now.
Yeah those were comments from when it was first posted and it wasn't edited at all it still needs work yeah they were true and yes I did fix most of the issues and I didn't need to see those comments
I am one to pick at story's I saw some major flaws in the story but it's still good the major problem is that when people comment have something negative it can be misinterpreted by the creator or others yes I do have to say there are way more developed story's out there but its important that there stay creative story's sure everyone has similar story's but no two story's are the same I just wish best luck to you keep going and don't let people put you down
Really wanna know more about Garry
6665824 Hi billy mays here.it's been around a year, but this story is about to get another chapter. But wait there's more! it'll have better pacing, grammar, punctuation, and character development.
8060190 YUS!!!!
I can't wait
chapter five should be out by saturday
There finally chapter five its been two years since I've touched this story. I will begin on chapter six soon sorry for such a long wait