Meet my OC: Trouble Maker. Also known as, the Tyrant Pony. His story will be coming soon. If you have any questions for him, he has a Tumblr ask blog.
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Hi. My name is Trouble Maker. I'm known around Equestria as the "Tyrant Pony." This story explains why.
If you have any special questions for me, visit my ask blog, Ask Trouble Maker
And be forewarned. I am trying to improve myself, but I am not a good person. Pony. Whatever.
Now then, let's get to it, shall we?
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Very interesting. I like the premise and the main character.
But.
We aren't really given much insight into his flaws, but I could be proven wrong in the next chapter. It's good to give a little backstory, as to why he lives in a forest. Keep in mind, that I have not read the second chapter.
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Okay. First of all, deleting comments is not cool.
Secondly, this story has not given a reason as to why the Gary Stu here can use Sombra powers and did not explain why he is evil. Please, don't be mad though, criticism can help. I wish to point out these things so that you can learn a little more about how to improve your style, which I like, but you need explanation. If you do not give an explanation to any questions many may ask, you won't get much popularity. I'm probably just being a big hypocrite, but f*** it.
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