Meet my OC: Trouble Maker. Also known as, the Tyrant Pony. His story will be coming soon. If you have any questions for him, he has a Tumblr ask blog.
Pinkie Finally Decides to introduce her special somepony to her friends! But it's not quite what they expected!
Can Twilight Sparkle get to the bottom of this? Or does she have an ulterior motive?
Twinkie fans keep a lookout for a surprise ending!
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This very good for a first
I liked it
Great for your first one shot!
I thought Maud was sweet on the Smooze as well.
that was a very good one shot. Very funny i had to stop reading i was laughing to much
It also involves Twipie so it gets a thumbs up from me
Not bad for a first go. Could use a touch of editing, but otherwise pretty good.
I dunno, man. It feels a little bareboned, like it needs a little something more.
Something like...
Oh let's say 9 or 10 extra chapters, a side story, an illustrated shipping chart and a my little pony/Star Trek the Next Generation cross over.
Twinkie
I'd love to see that.