When Rainbow Dash's special somepony leaves her, she falls into a funk. Luckily, Fluttershy knows how to get her out of it, but it requires trust.
Meet my OC: Trouble Maker. Also known as, the Tyrant Pony. His story will be coming soon. If you have any questions for him, he has a Tumblr ask blog.
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This sentence could use a rewrite. I had a very hard time reading it.
This just felt like it came out of nowhere and doesn't really fit with the rest of the story.
This was nice. I normally don't like stories about getting over break-ups, but this one actually not too bad.
Damn it!
Why couldn't this be longer? I was really getting Into it. I was loving it. It should've been longer imo.
6162191 tots agree with ya
6162191 I am considering doing another chapter.
You should do another one, it was quite good. When Rainbow Dash was listing the things she loved about him, I felt so bad for her. You did a great job bringing out her emotions.
Cute, short, and we'll done. Thx.
A very well done story, its hard to find a decent one sided ship, even harder to a good one at that. The only problem here is that you need to space out your paragraphs more, otherwise it just looks like a big wall of text. I hope this gets featured one day. Good luck to you, my fellow writer.
Rainbow Dash launched into a frenzy. No longer contented with mere punches, she kicked, slapped, tackled, and even bit the hapless pillow.
I dread the day she and him meet again...