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The Longest Night of the Year

It is the longest night of the year, and this year's Winter Moon is the most beautiful one yet. But Luna is finding it hard to enjoy her work. She flies off alone and meets someone who makes her think...

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--blank-- #1 · Jun 29th, 2015 · · ·

This story is great!

EbonyDanger

EbonyDanger #2 · Jun 29th, 2015 · · ·

This was really well done. I liked it. It reminded me a bit of my own story Deal for a Life.

Briarpelt

Briarpelt #3 · Jul 20th, 2015 · · ·

This was amazing. In terms of technical matters, I noticed no grammar or spelling errors at all (although I may have missed some grammar stuff, as I have somewhat limited understanding in that region). As a story, too, though, this was really well put together! The scenes flowed into each other nicely, it was paced well, and was easy to follow. I loved the idea of the tale itself, and I don't think anyone could have done a better job.