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It's ironic how everything came to pass. One moment you're moments away from just...ending your pain only to have your life flipped from depressing madness, to less depressing madness with more colored ponies around.
So long story short a friend of mine gave me a 'replica' weapon of Coyote Starrk. As a gesture of friendship a lot of people would be like 'that's awesome! Thanks!' for me...I did say 'thank you, this is nice' and did enjoy it but I wasn't really in the 'right mind' at the time. When I looked over it it just so happened to actually be a real pistol...sadly that's not something you want a depressed person to have at times, and sadly it wasn't one of those 'safe times'.

So when I wrote down my apology to everyone, and made sure to tell everyone what my stuff sold for and or who wanted them they could have it....I put it up to my head and fired.

Now that's where my old story ended, my new story starts with a little girl kicking me in the stomach for literally no reason while ponies are staring at me like I just committed murder...and in some way I did.


Here's a fun and depressing story that actually go hand in hand with me wanting to write something nice but vent problems with me. Hope you like it. There will be depressing and slight suicidal thoughts that I do not promote in any sense, sad things, and being mean to ponies when they want to help

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7192494 yay someone likes it:twilightsmile:

intresting gonna follow it and see how far the rabbit hole goes

nice start, can't wait to read more.
I love Stark, and the personality of your character comes close to his, so this is great.
How strong is he in this form? Compared to the Ponyvers powerhouses.
Only thing, but more a personal taste thing, you use the word "honestly" a little bit to much i think.
Try other words.
so on to the next chapter

"Except most people agree sleeping with a teddy bear keeps them happy instead of being cold at night." I mentally retort, heading straight downstairs for food. After walking in the kitchen(which is just a pretty standard one, look into your own and you'll find out) I see my brother who just got home from work a few hours ago filling his water bottle from the fridge.

I'm 21 and I still do have my teddy bears so ok.

After waiting for about half an hour we saw a group of Pegasi flying above us. Half went and put out what was left of the tower fire, which largely died out, the others flew near us but kept a distance. After it looked like they were talking amongst themselves, one flew closer to us. She had wild blue and yellow hair, er, mane, like fire and wore a blue and yellow jumpsuit… huh. Also goggles. “Do you two speak any language?” She asked, voice rather gruff but not gravelly.

I'm still surprised how they are able to be seen by then.
I mean they are a kind of spirit aren't they??they would just be seen by people if they wished to unless they have a good spiritual ernegy sense.
But I guess this can be taken off as they are the element bearer and because of that they can be seen by then

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Not sure if I explained this, but the main reason why they can be seen is because the world is so infused with magic, something that is similar to Reishi in this story, that they basically have a corporeal body that anybody can see and make contact with

When I looked over it it just so happened to actually be a real pistol...

That's strange, considering Starrk's guns don't look like any pistols I've ever seen.

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Its more so the 'oh yeah, this thing is the real deal, not a prop" kind of thing.

'Also don't "bitch" me, I might be small but I will unbirth you and raise you with manners.'

I died. :rainbowlaugh:

The imps we're thankfully easy to dispatch. My speed made that a non-issue. The Pinkies we're a challenge. They had natural armor and then there was the big guy. I didn't like how he was just watching me fight the others. Then again they are smart demons.

:pinkiegasp::They named a demon after me? I wonder why...

Meanwhile...

Pinkamena::pinkiecrazy:

“It’s nice to meet you Ajin.” She said, getting up and dusting herself off. “So, where do we start?”

AjinZecora:"You'll find out in the next part."

What crossover is this?

aaaaaaaaa my heartstrings!

Loved the chapter! Crescent is best snek mama~ Also hope Lillinette gets brought into the family as well hehe.

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I'm sure something will happen if we remember

“Yeah, given your race, lack of obvious citizenship… Still, if you both are corporate, I can get you both to the nearest town, but you’ll both have to be locked up until we can get somepony from Canterlot to figure out how this will go.”

Cooperate. Not Corporate.

So is Mike gay now or what? I had to reread to find out Alex was a he and they have a date, their making out, and their attracted to one another? Like wtf.

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Their Bisexual, as he still mentions his love for Derpy, Polkadot, and Claire several times which is why Alex also felt concerned Mike wouldn't like him cause he thought he was only straight.

Is Lilynette the only female Bleach character who appears in this story?

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No, there will be another

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Seriously, being locked up sounds really unnecessary and unjustified?

'if you insist on learning how to run on water at those speeds, add training time, four months. Also don't "bitch" me, I might be small but I will unbirth you and raise you with manners.'

Honestly I wouldn’t mind reading a side series of the lewd stuff Starrk goes through, with the unbirth quote being a sort of blooper chapter…

“And you think, knowing Claire as long as you have, she wouldn’t have dumped him if he didn’t have something to blackmail her with? He sure talked to her like he was holding something over her head.”

Let's hope she ends up here with us at some point

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