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Nekiyha


I'm a Canadian writer. They/them pronouns. Asexual as all hell. I also have a Patreon now, if you're interested.

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I strangely find this story compelling. Tracking.

I am waiting for one of them to have a heart attack. Sudden wait gain would kill them I think pretty quick.

Luna- well this is a mild at best issue (shapeshifts into her normal form). there. now give us a moment, sister, as i figure out how to reverse this spell.

...... this is a non issue. 100% non issue.

soon they're going to have to start rollijg around to get anywhere

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I'm intrigued, please do continue.

I am really enjoying this. I hope you plan to continue this story.

This is a guilty pleasure, I admit. All the same I hope it has a satisfying conclusion, what entertainment is there (beyond our sick fetish) in having our beloved characters get into trouble with no way out?
I can see a couple of the mane six accepting a fatter them, but that doesn't mean they just give up. Pinkies the obvious choice for not having a problem with this,:pinkiehappy: while I can see Rarity continuing to brush her coat and serendipitously work out to sculpt her fat into a more pleasing shape. "I may be a cow, but I'll be the most stunningly beautiful cow in Equestria.":raritywink:
Twi is more concerned with her mind than her body, so she might only find bulking up annoying (or pull an L, "I require a high sugar diet to maintain my keen analytic mind.":twilightsmile:) while she continues to observe to learn what's going on, maybe antagonizing the Stuffer into revealing some things if she's clever. An aside, has it been explained if they can't use magic, thus why Twilight isn't blowing down walls and teleporting?
Fluttershy will be more concerned for the others than herself, but I think she takes a lot of pride in her natural beauty and might flutterrage if a viable target presents itself.:flutterrage: The athletic AJ and RD are the most hurt by the Stuffer. Applejack's set her identity on being dependable for her family and friends, how dependable can she be if she starts breathing heavy just walking around the room.:ajsleepy: Dash is even worse off, as illustrated; she IS the fastest Pegasus alive, becoming an immobile mass is going to weigh (hehe, pun:rainbowkiss:) on her more than most.

The mystery coupled with the decent writing has gotten me really curious as to where this is going, I hope their is some more to this than shameless chub fetish. Not to demand you change your story if it is, I'm along for the ride, even if I'm not a fan of morbidly obese immobile ponies.

I'm ready for the next chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter

pinkie knows too much about the traps of the room plus that static guy says that his boss has great contacts and pinkie knows everyone in equestria so im saying pinkie is the bad guy

Love the story! still hoping for an update.

why is they 0 words in this chapter

Fixed it! Sorry. I have no idea what happened!

Yes! been waiting SO long for this!

Hmmm, I wonder if THEY grabbed all six but only wanted to get the most threatening out of the way. Twilight, RD and Pinky are the biggest threats to a magical attack, and most targeted it seems by the fattening up. Other than larger portions for the (in my headcanon at least) biggest of the group AJ, Rarity and Flutts seem to be secondary targets. Which is disappointing because Rarity is my favorite chubby pony, between her stress eating and drama habits. An entertaining combination, this store needs more marshmallow!

Could this be a plot to cause a famine in Equestria? It hasn't really been explained if THEY are using magic to make everypony bulk up or if it induces extreme fugue overeating and a drastically speeds weight gain. The second seems the most likely (and interesting), if THEY could just fatten everything why go through all this trouble? And would it damage the Equestrian economy, since earth ponies are probably the best farmers around and export outside their borders?
Anyway, suddenly ravishingly hungry ponies eat all their crops. Then they are in the the unfortunate predicament of being at once obese and starving. Which I think was Famines plan in Good Omens before the books plot happened.

Also T.H.E.Y. = The Hoof Expanding You

Anyway, I had fun analyzing, now back to serious work.

What I want to know is how there avoiding heart attacks.

with a flash of night blue magic.

WOAH WOAH WOAH. Luna?! That's really the only thing I was thinking of here O.O

>Noodles in lasagne
nah m8 they're just sheets of pasta

Huh, we have a sudden infux of questions: THEY put everyone to sleep to pave the way for this plan, hpw did no one notice? Or was that a figurative sleep of ignorance? Is it the whole planet or just Equestria effected? The voice seems to be a pony, but are his bosses? Not to mention access to massive amounts of magic to counteract non alicorn Twi and the Princesses.

Updates seem to be picking up which is great. Is the story nearing the described conclusion? Or is this the beginning of a Chubbyverse? Where the main 6 need to resist their force-feeding overlords, using magic to lose weight after getting fattened back and forth? Wishful thinking on my part, looking forward to the next part. Good luck.

Can't wait till the Mane 6 become immobile.

I don't like seeing them all so sad, but this is a good chapter. I cant say I wasn't expecting this type of story.

Happy to see this updating, I know the pains of balancing college and... well anything else. I used to run a western themed tabletop rpg with some friends but now I just don't have time.

I think you updated this chapter with last chapter in front of it. Maybe you did that on purpose to get over a word limit. But if so you should delete the last chaper so it doesn't confuse new readers.

I'm curious if we're nearing the end or if you plan to continue once they are released. So few chubby stories last for long.

I'm also a little disappointed we didn't check in on the "progress" the others had made while bedridden. We've been a little light on descriptions.

Also, what's an estimate on how big they are? With people I think it's about the 600 - 700 pound range you can't move. Is that true with your ponies as well?

I hope it doesn't end on a big downer, I've always been of the mindset that it's no fun to watch someone just lose with no chance to succeed, even striving and failing has its drama. But nevertheless do what you want, it's your story man.

I just found this story and so far its became one of my favorite clop-fic about weight gain (top five at least for me) but please keep the story going. Good luck with school I know it can be difficult juggling school and hobbies like writing

And a special thanks to Elsaack, who has been providing many good ideas for this story.

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Yes, overthinking MLP fanfics has payed off, now I just need to figure out a way to profit.
What am I talking about, this is payment enough. So it looks like we do get to dig into the mystery of why, cool. I had though maybe a distant relative of Discord that gained power the more ponies... well, gained. But then why hire a morphophilic mercenary mage and why release the Mane 6? Showing up in person is gutsy too, though with the degradation of the Royal Guard maybe it's not so risky.

I have the feeling that a new game is to be played now that they are out. Can't wait to see.

6856950 Haha! Expect the next update relatively soon! I'm glad my giving credit where it's due makes you feel as excited as I get when you leave a comment!

Besides. We're just meeting the pony who fattened them, not the main boss. Not for a bit yet

This was a good chapter. Short but got to the point and set up for the next chapter. Do wish we got to see a few things. One when the mane six was realesed and who was last to loose their mobility so they could be free. Second some reactions of the ponies in Ponyville and got to see the state of the town. Third even (but this is just really a personal one) the size of luna and how big shes gotten. Last is the sizes of the mane six, yes they are immobile but some have been more immobile than the others and would be bigger but we haven't gotten much description of them. Liked can Rainbow even still move her hooves any more and has to rely on someone to feed her. Than if Twilight and Rarity how big they gotten and how reliant are they on magic. But I Know this could be explain in chapters. I look forward for more of this story and excited to see what going to happen.

Who the heck is that?

6858323 The pony that held them captive for so long? The one that talked to them through the speakers and stuff.

6858355 Well, at least we'll finally learn his/her name.

6857765 Yeah. This chapter was basically set up. I'll get into pretty much everything you've mentioned in the next chapter or two. I just enjoyed leaving the cliffhanger, and didn't want to distract from the ending of the chapter by putting a bunch of description in.

Anyone interested in making side stories of how others from around Equestria were handling the situation?

I want this to be Night Light, I really do.

You should merge the previous chapter with this one, it has the same text before the "Several days later" break.

This has been a great read so far and I am looking forward to see how It is going to go on. I wander if the ponies are going to be served up to be meals for predators or something like that

Please don't let the villain loose by Deus Ex Machina or something similar. Takes all the fun out of it and can ruin the story for some.

I for one really did like this chapter and am excited to see where it leads. I do wounder what you original plan was but for now I don't know where the story is going. I can't wait tell the next chapter

Things are going to be interesting in the meantime...

I did like the change of pace in the story and to see how the towns been effected. Also how the main six how they are after returning home. But this does make me wonder if they are going to still be gaining weight or if the reached a plateau with their weight gain.

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Yes, but at the same time they shouldn't win by default, our feeder and his employers are amazingly powerful already, with everyone powerless against them. I'm a big believer in a struggle being a necessary part of drama, even in for-fun projects like this. Though I won't demand any sort of outcome, I like being surprised and not knowing what's going on.

It's interesting to me analyzing what's going on and the motive of the antagonists, whether informed by corporate greed, targeted anger, or alien mindsets. I wonder if this phenomenon is limited to the pony tribes, Equestria, allied countries or every sentient thing in this world.

On a smaller scale, looks like the mane 6 are taking their newly ingrained massive appetite's differently, Twi seems to recognize a problem, but Rarity seems to have given up her old figure happily at this point. We'll have to see where things are going, I wonder what we'll see next.

its nice to see a slightly happier chapter. this story was almost getting depressing.

It's so good so far! I wish there were more to read right now T^T

PLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEE UPDATE THIS!!!

I've been meaning to leave my thoughts on this ever since you started, but it was only till recently have I mustered the courage to actually log back in. Absolutely fantastic little idea of yours, been loving every bit. Looking forward to seeing how this ends and the other wonderfully devious works you may concoct. Hopefully there will still be plenty of eating and stuffinating in this one before the end! Keep it up!

7028690 Good for you for getting the courage to tell me what you think! I applaud your effort.
Sorry for the delay, I've been crazy busy with school and life. I haven't been checking fimfiction much, so I feel really bad about not replying sooner.

Don't worry, lots more weight gain and stuffing to come. :)

Great chapter, I hope to see more of how life in going on with the rest of Equestia.

I am interested to see if buckdonalds gets built up. Also how bih other ponies are getting and how they are coping with it.

I'm gonna make my Prediction right here..

BucDonalds is actually the corporation behind all the evil spells and fattening and they've fattened everyone to make them rich in profits

Very nice. I hope we get to learn more about whoever was behind this.

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