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Yes, overthinking MLP fanfics has payed off, now I just need to figure out a way to profit.
What am I talking about, this is payment enough. So it looks like we do get to dig into the mystery of why, cool. I had though maybe a distant relative of Discord that gained power the more ponies... well, gained. But then why hire a morphophilic mercenary mage and why release the Mane 6? Showing up in person is gutsy too, though with the degradation of the Royal Guard maybe it's not so risky.
I have the feeling that a new game is to be played now that they are out. Can't wait to see.
6856950 Haha! Expect the next update relatively soon! I'm glad my giving credit where it's due makes you feel as excited as I get when you leave a comment!
Besides. We're just meeting the pony who fattened them, not the main boss. Not for a bit yet
This was a good chapter. Short but got to the point and set up for the next chapter. Do wish we got to see a few things. One when the mane six was realesed and who was last to loose their mobility so they could be free. Second some reactions of the ponies in Ponyville and got to see the state of the town. Third even (but this is just really a personal one) the size of luna and how big shes gotten. Last is the sizes of the mane six, yes they are immobile but some have been more immobile than the others and would be bigger but we haven't gotten much description of them. Liked can Rainbow even still move her hooves any more and has to rely on someone to feed her. Than if Twilight and Rarity how big they gotten and how reliant are they on magic. But I Know this could be explain in chapters. I look forward for more of this story and excited to see what going to happen.
Who the heck is that?
6858323 The pony that held them captive for so long? The one that talked to them through the speakers and stuff.
6858355 Well, at least we'll finally learn his/her name.
6857765 Yeah. This chapter was basically set up. I'll get into pretty much everything you've mentioned in the next chapter or two. I just enjoyed leaving the cliffhanger, and didn't want to distract from the ending of the chapter by putting a bunch of description in.
Anyone interested in making side stories of how others from around Equestria were handling the situation?
I want this to be Night Light, I really do.