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This has been a great read so far and I am looking forward to see how It is going to go on. I wander if the ponies are going to be served up to be meals for predators or something like that
Please don't let the villain loose by Deus Ex Machina or something similar. Takes all the fun out of it and can ruin the story for some.
I for one really did like this chapter and am excited to see where it leads. I do wounder what you original plan was but for now I don't know where the story is going. I can't wait tell the next chapter