Sometimes you just need to scream. Fluttershy knows this.
She's just the dirty-by-trade tomboy.
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Cute! Thanks for sharing!
(shortest review in history of reviews)
... This was... I'm not certain what to say. It was good, don't get me wrong, but it underwent a huge shift in tone between each chapter. I was prepared for two unrelated plotlines, but not two completely different themes.
Oh god, I know how that feels.
Both snippets were fairly interesting, but just too short to really draw me in. The second chapter in particular might make for an interesting one-shot of several thousand words.
Do you mean don?
6041128 I always use darn in this context even though it's illogical.
Much of it's been said before. I rather enjoyed the first part, but it was too short and, like you said, had nothing to do with the second part. Still liking though /) Keep at it
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But...so many questions! Need more!
Poor rainbow...
6044049 Just wanted to. Isn't the first story with a blank canvass as cover art.
6048312 I wrote another story with a blank white cover.
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I bet he did mean "don," but I honestly prefer it as "darn." It means to knit, and sounds like she delicately crafted a smile. The word sits well with me here because Fluttershy does it. The author accidentally poetry.
6127708 Not quite as accidental as you might think. But thanks!
Who knew? Fluttershy is a Zonker.
(Wonders if anyone else is old enough to get that rather lame pun.)
Yeah... I think should have just posted both stories separately and try to hot the minimum of a 1000 words.