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Chicken by fluttershywriter

Slice of Life

Rainbow Dash has invited Scootaloo to watch the Wonderbolts with her. But Scootaloo can't fly, and she is afraid that Rainbow Dash will hate her. She has one week to figure out the basics of flying. Will she be forced to tell Rainbow Dash the truth?

***NOTE:*** Yes, I understand that the beginning seems very similar to the start of "Sleepless in Ponyville," but I wrote this waaaaaay before that episode aired. So no comments about that, please. :)

First Published
18th May 2012

Last Modified
28th Jun 2012

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Diamond Sparkle

#1 · 52w, 4d ago ·

It could be an acutal episode, it's that good.

bookplayer

#2 · 52w, 4d ago ·

I love this fic. LOVE it. Great job.

ShadowKick

#3 · 52w, 4d ago ·

This plotline has been done pretty often, but... it's just fantastic. Especially when the story is as well done as this one is. Thanks for sharing this.

I love stories where Scootaloo ends up happy.

Sorren

#4 · 52w, 4d ago ·

It's good. I'm not going to go over the top and yell best. But it is certainly good, though much overused.

Gylden Glør

#5 · 52w, 4d ago ·

Me gusta. :pinkiehappy:

My only complaint is that there wasn't a scene where a giant muffin came in with a buster sword and had an epic fight with Discord on the Plane of Death.

But, besides that, this fic is amazing!

Coolguy3443343434

#6 · 52w, 1d ago ·

Just wanted to say, You don't need to have all Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Sweetie Belle seprate there should be a Cutie Mark Crusaders Icon you click to have all three together it just saves some Room. :P

fluttershywriter

#7 · 52w, 1d ago ·

>>619892619892 Thanks for the tip, I'm new here

Coolguy3443343434

#8 · 51w, 5d ago ·

Your welcome, I'm new here to! I've haven't been on in a while. :L

I'm back now, and im Going to start some random new Series called War-pony or Something. For the hay of it.

SilverStreak

#9 · 51w, 34m ago ·

Cute story, I really enjoyed it

:yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: 5 flutteryays out of 5

Foggy_Skie

#10 · 49w, 6d ago ·

Daawww

DbzOrDie

#11 · 48w, 5d ago ·

Applejack cringed. “Well, my sister always says that everyone develops at a different rate,”

Should be Applebloom

PaulRap Raptor

#12 · 44w, 6d ago ·

Excellent. :yay:

Carpetbagger

#13 · 42w, 3d ago ·

HNNNG!

Cute and a joy to read. The little montage was very well done, I could practically hear "Crusaders Go Crusading" during that part. Hope Scootaloo's episode in season 3 is something like this.

NothingSpecial

#14 · 39w, 6d ago ·

>>608789608789 I agree; this could easily be an episode from the show itself, which I've never been able to say for an MLP fic before (and I've read at least 2.7 million words of 'em)! Length, pacing and style are all episode-perfect. Of course, I just came here for the Scootadash friendshipping, and got exactly what I wanted there. Bravo! :scootangel: :rainbowkiss:

Isseus

#15 · 25w, 3d ago · 2

This felt like reading an episode script. It pulled me inside immediately, the descriptions were very fluent and clear, and Scoots' personality was just how I'd imagined it. Scoots was a bit more fragile and emotional than usual, but considering the situation, it worked really well. And the end result? A happy smile on my face and a big d'aww. :twilightsmile:

I only came here after I read your story Letters To Rainbow Dash, and it seems I have several other stories to read from you. Consider me your new stalker. :scootangel:

fluttershywriter

#16 · 25w, 3d ago ·

>>16690001669000 Yay! A stalker! :scootangel:

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