• Member Since 5th Aug, 2014
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Fifty Shades of Yellow


Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.

Comments ( 13 )

Will have to give this a read. Great premise, so this will be a hit if it is written well!

This based off stranded deep

Not a bad start. I would have one critique, but it's not about the story itself. The tags are wrong. This isn't "Slice of Life". This should be tagged "Adventure" "Human" (assuming Anon is a human) and possibly "Romance". Just so readers know what they're getting.

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Thank you for that fix.


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I didn't even know what that was until a small Google search. This was actually long before that game came out.

This is good bud keep it up look forward to more

Pls, let there be sharks!

6027803 molestia, mayor mare without her gray hair dye the list could be endless

And the rule that pranks shouldn't get this far stands true. Nice

Im sorry...the music just made me laugh like a maniac in collage...i feel weird now...why is everypony staring at me?:derpytongue2:

"Flutterbutter". Ha, nice!

Pink is wanted?
For some reason that just does not seem right.

That was a great fanfic. keep up the good writing :ajsmug:

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