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Fifty Shades of Yellow


Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.

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You earned my like and my favorite, Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

Awww, poor Fluttershy just wants some Company, i can fully understand that, but how she makes sure that her Company stays is something she really needs to work on.

Poor Fluttershy, she has so many issues, but this is taking things a tad bit to far.

I love these yandere stories! I need more of this! :flutterrage:

>She turns around to pout at you. ”Anon, doesn’t the wonder of nature fascinate you?”
>“Honestly, not really, no.” She just stands there and gives you that look. You can only hear the sounds of birds chirping in a nearby tree, followed by wings flapping away. Fluttershy turns back and keeps walking forward. “Listen, I think I should be going home.” She keeps on walking then stops when passing over another hilltop. “Hey, I said—“ When you catch up, a small log cabin is in the distance. “Fluttershy?”
>”Do you want to find out?” You shut up and stand right in front of the small cabin. She unlocks the door and walks inside, ignoring the fact that it is pitch black. When you wander inside, you can barely see two feet in front of you. The curtains from one of the window moves to the side, letting the sunlight to show the interior of the wooden home. There is a small chimney in the farthest corner, with a couch facing it from the other side and a support beam in the center of the cabin. To your left are a bed and a cabinet in the corner. You look over to see a coffee table and—
>”I-it’s just that, this place is my home away from home.”
>She turns around. ”This is the one place that no one but you knows about. It is where I can truly be happy when I’m alone.”
>”Someday you’ll end up in a problem that you can’t solve.”
>Fluttershy scoots closer to you. ”Maybe, you could come over here and work in peace. You know, away from all the distraction.”
>”She would always push me aside for something else. It's always ‘I’ve got practice today’ or ‘something just came up’ for her. If only she could tell the truth that she doesn’t want to come along, instead of giving me these same excuses.” Fluttershy sadly gazes at the floor in front of her.
>She rests a hand on your arm. ”Don’t you want to get a full nights rest without waking up in the morning to do your work last minute?”
>“What about the owner, didn’t they ever come by?”
>She eyes the wooden oak floor before maintaining eye contact with you. “The owner never came back. When I knocked on the door, it slid open. I waited for a while before entering this place. I found most of the furniture covered in dust and cobwebs covered every corner of this house. It took me some time to clean it up and… to move out some the disturbing stuff that they had. ”
>“Hey, it’s not so bad, right?” Her disappointment rises as she tilts her head. “Cheer up, you have me.” Just as you finished up your sentence, her head perks up.
>“I… do?”
>“I guess you have a point. Who knows; maybe their hobby literally bit them in the ass.”
>Fluttershy leans in so that her other hand slides right by your back, just so that she can grab your shoulder. ”Besides, it will be you and me, alone, in the woods.” She stops rubbing your arm to move her head right beside your own. ”Doesn’t that sound wonderful?” She whispers into your ear.
>”Anon, wait!” When you turn back around, you take a glimpse of Fluttershy swinging her backpack to your head. You couldn’t react fast enough and fall to the ground. You lay back and hold the part of your face that she struck.
Those lines are golden, also I lurk the story and follow you, and that plot twist was... wow.

I love it, but I see how you could improve your workshop. Chat me, bro.

When will next chapter be posted?

Im glad this updated I was really starting to miss your writing. I'm still interested in how Fluttershy thinks this will work. I like how you write the MC's reactions it very realistic. It is how I would act in that situation. Keep up the excellent work.

Love how hellbent Fluttershy is about making their "relationship" to work.

I need to read moooooore. . . I like the obsessive fluttershy stories. . .

It's not going to work.

a simple police investigation would find him.

they'll start questioning Anon's friends and when they get to rainbow dash
it'll go something like:"Anon? oh ya! last time i saw him he was following Fluttershy into woods but he never came back."

the investigators will observe Fluttershy going into the woods everyday.
they'll follow her. find Anon.
Fluttershy's arrested for abduction and holding another against their will.

Fluttershy goes to prison. Anon ends up with rainbow dash.


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Write more damnit. Manaiacal affection was a masterpiece, i know you can pull it off again.

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Yes, I was cutting back on updates so that I could focus on school work for the summer and Flutterbully. Fear not, this will be updated and continued.

7424151 Thank you so much for this story. :pinkiesmile:

I'll look forward to this update, as well as your other stories. :twilightsmile:

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