Dragon Ball E

by Roxia

The Will To Never Give Up

The two fighters glared at each other for what seemed to be an eternity when in reality it's been a minute.

"I see you're just a power hungry menace who'd rather steal, than earn his strength!"Said Goku grimacing.

"Why earn it, when it's much more convenient, and fun to take it from others."The centaur said with a smug look."Besides once i unlock that chest all of Equestria's power will belong to me,its my birth right!"

"Now you're just being insane, someone need's to teach you not mess with other peopl- er ponies lives and i'll be glad to volunteer."

Being close enough to the cages, Goku felt something tugging at his pants. A purple pony with a horn and wings was trying to get his attention.

"Sir, you need to get out of here while you can, Tirek can steal energy and magic!" The alicorn pleaded clearly worried for the Saiyan "It's all my fault i wasn't able to stop him, and now my friends are paying the price." She said as she shed a tear.

Goku had a new found respect for the little pony, after hearing that she feared for his safety and felt that she had to stop Tirek for her friends. "Hey, you tried to protect your friends and that's what counts! I can't tell you how much my friends mean to me so i know where you're coming from, you just need to keep going no matter what, for their sake.

Twilight had shown traits of a true friend and this was enough for Goku to make a decision that was extremely risky but worth it.

"Hey, whats your name?"Asked Goku.

"Twilight Sparkle,why?"The confused Twilight asked tilting her head.

"I like to know the names of my friends!"Goku said with a thumbs up."Let me see what this Tirek is made of, after that i'll leave it to up to you."

Finally having enough of being ignored Tirek speaks. "Hey! I grow weary of this friendship talk, let's get this over with,i want to repay you for that punch you dealt me earlier." Tirek yelled.

"Heh, you're right, sorry to keep you waiting let's get this party started!"

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Tirek rushed Goku's position,leaping high into the air in an attempt to crush the Saiyan. Stomping onto the ground Tirek thought he had crushed Goku,only to feel his hoof slowly raising up involuntarily."Impossible!"

"Whew,you're a heavy one!" Goku managed to lift Tireks hoof "Ha!Uh oh.." Tirek snatched Goku up with his large hands.

"I wonder how much your bones can take before breaking!" Tirek then proceeded to tighten his grip on Goku. I wonder what your energy tastes like, lets have a try shall we." Opening his mouth wide, the centaur began absorbing the Saiyans energy.

Not good, i have to break out now before he actually manages to gain the advantage! Goku thought to himself. Wait somethings not right! I can't transform into a super saiyan!?

Author's Note:

Why can't Goku transform into the legendary super saiyan? Will Tirek manage to defeat him? Is this 20 questions!? Find out next time on Dragon Ball E!!!

Once again sorry for these being small,and you may have noticed i color coded the dialogue so its easier for you guys to know who's talking!

Some Epic Dbz music to go along with this

Edit:I'm gonna leave dis here for now i want to work on a romance now i'll get back to it though, i'll get back to it faster if someone ask's for more btw wink wink

Comments

[zeldawolffang]

.....color text......cant transform.........
GOD DAMMIT EVERY TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry just hate it when a character loses there power! because why not right?
also please don't do the color text thing
thanks ^_^

[Roxia]

5972690 Okay just for you I won't anymore :P

[steastritz]

I heard the xenoverse intro play in my head...idk why

[zeldawolffang]

5972735 thanks :DDDDDDDD

[Baileyjrob]

First, capitalize your "i"s. That's a rule of english. Anytime an "I" is used as a pronoun, capitalize it. Second, SLOW DOWN THE PACE!! I'm gonna keep giving this a chance, but please work on your pacing.

[CoffeeMinion]

I want to read more of this. I'm far from a DBZ fan, but I think this is "just crazy enough to work."

Please keep going!

[Roxia]

5978885 That comment just gave me the motivation to keep going, so i will ty friend

[saiyanpony]

nice story, glad to see that you made a way for Goku to have some trouble in equestria though even in his normal form he is still far stronger than anypony on the planet. I do hope you start to make the chapters longer though.

[Boyzilla]

Another Dragon Ball Z story? I welcome you to the DBZ writers community of Equestrian Saiyans! Your story has been added to the saiyan folder! And wish you the best of luck in writing Dragon Ball E!

[YeetingHunter]

The only complaint I realm have is the goku, already along with the other z fighters don't use magic. They use Kia. So goku's energy being absorbed didn't make sense.

[Hairy Konquerer]

shame how it's cancelled. Also it'd be much more interesting with Vegeta because he'd make Tirek fear him beforekilling him, or Future Trunks cause he'd Yamcha him with his sword.

[Flutters Is Shy]

Un-cancel,Pls~

[Roxia]

6354045 I'll think about it lel

[Flutters Is Shy]

6366045
Pretti pretti pls.

[ArrowToTheOverusedMeme]

Pretty sure Goku would OHKO Tirek post Freiza saga onward, but still seems good.

[EndertheDark_0326]

No no no no NOOOOO! Tired should NOT BE ABLE TO STEAL GOKU'S KI! TIREK CAN ONLY STEAL MAGIC! YOU DAMN IDIOT!