Everybody knows about Goku, the one Saiyan who avenged his race and defeated the evil Frieza, and especially his son, Gohan. Goku is said to be dead, what they don't know, is he is actually alive, and sent to a strange planet where friendship is a form of magic. In short, its Vegeta's worst nightmare.
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Hmmm I wonder how they will react to ssj goku
4826959 Only time will tell...
even if i am not the greatest fan anymore from Dragonball, i think this is going to be interessting.
Hmmm... Seems legit.
There are numerous errors here that take away from the story's interesting premise. If you haven't already, I would recommend finding a proofreader.
4827372 I do know there are many errors, but c'mon. It's the first chapter! And yes, I do plan on getting a proofreader, just dunno who...
4827974 I don't blame you. My very first chapter I ever made (still didn't transfer them to fimfiction) had errors. Plus, it was in a play script at that time!
Wow, this story is already popular!
4827974 How about yer mum
random comment!!!!!!!! but i ike the fic eitherway
4829772 You're profile pic matches that comment.
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I will continue reading this with enthusiasm. I find it to be an extremely eye-catching story that contains a wonderful plotline. This will remain as one of the few stories I still keep tabs on.
4833056 What...?
Interesting so far. Looking forward to future chapters.
goku is in for the ride of his life. lol. hey if you don't already have a proof reader, id be glad to help out. just PM me and ill look over the story and report to you what i find also heres a for your troubles
Lol
You asked me what's going to happen:
This...this is what's going to happen. (Probably not, but it'd be hilarious if it did.)
Or maybe something like this:
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Ok a few things. First the premis (I had to have spelled that wrong) is a good one, the DBZ verse is full of aliens and fantastic creatures even on Earth so its not a streach for Goku to find his way here. The thing is so far you're doing whats called "telling, not showing". In other words your listing a series of events makeing it seem more like an outline of a story than an actual narritive. That and you break the 4th wall with the narration makes it seem more like I'm listning to a guy talking rather than reading a story. I'll keep following this because its only the first 2 chapters and some of my favorite fics were MUCH worse in this stage. Keep up the practice and dont let negative comments get you down.
4844479 To be honest, I haven't gotten any negative comments t'ill now. Also, it's suppose to be a comedy too! So, you should have expected fourth wall breaking! Who knows, maybe the speaker is actually an important character in the mlp universe... Lol jk that would be stupid.
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Just offering a bit of critique. Not that I should be talking Im no Shakespear. Just keep it up, like I said this idea looks promising.
4844773 I should probably get a proofreader though.
Goddamnit Nappa
I thought you were dead!
Sudden emphasis on Everybody...
This story is so corny, I love it
I'm also reading tho goku parts in the abridged voice
Can't wait for the next chapter!
MUST. SEE. MOAR!!!
I love this! I hope to see a new chapter out soon.
God damnit.
Well then .... next chapter?
Great chapter! Will be interesting to see what will happen now. Looking forward to future chapters! Be Well.
Just wait until she sees a SUPER SAIYAN!
Loving the story. It's well written and has a lot of good stuff. Can't wait for the next! ^u^
Let me guess she will see gokus memories?
4865439 Not, even, close. That's too predictable.
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Don't...know why I write that. But oh well. Seriously though, when is Goku going to just show everyone that he's the strongest in the universe?
4866257 Well, you gave me an idea, and he'll show them in the next chapter.
4866348 Okay, that's cool.
Hmmm....I honestly wasn't expecting Celestia to lash out like that. Then again, if she's heard of Saiyans, it makes sense.
I bet 20 bit celestia knows about frezia and she fears for her kingdom about a mortal stronger than frezia or she doesn't know about frezia and after what twilight told her fears goku might try to kill her and rule her kingdom
Interesting, though the Mane 6 do know what horses are, consult Season 1 finale "The Best Night Ever!"
4868760 Heh, my bad! Lemme change that.
Holy crap! 60 likes and over 450+ readers! Thanks guys! I plan to make this story the best!
Awesome fic so far dude :D, when is the 5th chapter coming out? You have certainly peaked my interest, also where do you put the mane six, princesses, Discord, Chrysalis, Sombra etc in terms of power level? Cause we already know Goku's current power level
Base Goku- 3,000,000 (or did Goku get another Zenkai in this fic?)
Goku (Kaioken x10)- 30,000,000
Goku (Kaioken x20)- 60,000,000
Super Saiyan Goku- 150,000,000
4885940 Ya know, i havent thought bout that... Ill tell there power levels in the next chapter!! Also, i am planning to make the next chapter up to atleast 4,000 words! So.... expect itt done atleast in 2 days!