Slipping through my hooves: The Diamond and the Belle

This story is a sequel to Slipping through my hooves: The Apple and the Blossom

She's slipping away from me...my sweet little Sweetie is at last leaving me, for now she has her mark, and is free from all that was. Free from me. But I don't want her to leave...I still need her...my dear little Sweetie...

OBS: This do not require reading the prequel at all.

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AwesomeRaisins

AwesomeRaisins #1 · Apr 18th, 2015 · · ·

“Because when the beams are blinding me, I won’t feel blue, because somewhere in the cod will be you!” She exclaimed, once more hugging me.

I think you mean crowd not cod.

keam

keam #2 · Apr 18th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah,sorry. Did you like the story?

Aripiprazole

Aripiprazole #3 · Apr 18th, 2015 · 1 · ·

And she was right. It was exactly why I wa slaying here

u wot m8?

AwesomeRaisins

AwesomeRaisins #4 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

5878636 Mhm.. I liked Apple bloom's better tho.

keam

keam #5 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

5878861
What the hell? Where is all these typos coming from?!

11111111

11111111 #6 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

Chapter one, 1,108 words.
Total: 1,172.

...

Sure FiMfiction.
Sure.

(I will try to read the story tomorrow. :D)

keam

keam #7 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

5883885
XD

(Thanks)

11111111

11111111 #8 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

5884774 Wonderful.
Kill someone off and it will be super awesome.
xDDDDD
Jk it was a nice read :3

keam

keam #9 · Apr 20th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5885510
Gret you enjoyed it. Now you just have to wait for the 3 story! :3

11111111

11111111 #10 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

5879576 I think the reason Apple's was better is because this story is very similar.
It's sort of like eating a bowl of Ice cream.
Then eating it again.
It's wonderful at first,
Then it's like, 'Yeah, I guess it tastes alright.'
Both stories are wonderful, but redundancy is the only issue.

AwesomeRaisins