The snowstorm of the century is bound to hit Equestria on the very night of Hearth's Warming Eve.
To save Ponyville's celebrations, and much more, is up to it's inhabitants, and to a pair of unlikely guests.
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When I started to write this story it was near Christmas, I swear.
Feel free to point out every mistake. Every help to improve this story is appreciated!
J'aime la caca car je suis un gros porc :D
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dat artwork.....IT FITS WHIT HER PERSONALITY
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I'll believe you if you'll believe me.
I haven't read this yet, but according to the statistics, I found something interesting:
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You see that screenshot, right? Now, take a closer look:
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I'll try to have an actual comment about the story soon.
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FIRST?
Trixie must have learned some new trick...
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I hope so.
This is a fascinating and surprisingly captivating story. I'll admit, I'm a sucker for stories that actually tries to move on with Trixie's character. Her determination and strict adherence to he own rules are really interesting traits. This, with the cast lineup being tagged, shows tremendous promise.
There's some minor errors (mostly the occasional skipped word or incorrect homonym - for instance, 'discrete' is a mathemetical term, the word you intended is 'discreet'), but not enough to detract from the reading.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
5862354 I'm glad that you liked it.
I really like to write of Trixie. Her social awkwardness, her attempt to adhere to a strict moral code that she only seems to understand, her being too unlucky to succeed and too stubborn to give up. She is defintely my favorite character. But this time I have a bigger scenario to manage than in my previous attempts. I hope this story will be worthy of your expectations.
Oh, this cannot end well. XD I am very much enjoying your interpretation of Trixie. She has so much potential and it's nice to see her getting the chance to shine. I also loved your descriptions in this story since it painted a very vivid picture of what was going on. I shall certainly be checking back for more.
5876332 Thank you very much! I'm proud of my descriptions.
I can anticipate to you that they will be severely tested when we'll reach Gilda's chapter.
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You've just made me crack up laughing and extremely excited for this chapter. Can't wait!
So far the story is good, and I did quite enjoy Trixie's chapter.
This one was rough, though. You need to proof read it. There's misspellings, missing words, etc all over the place. You misspelled Mayor as Major throughout the entire thing for instance.
5962290 Thanks for having pointed out. At least I fixed that, and I'm glad you have enjoyed the story so far.
I know my limits (I have plenty), and I tried to find an help at the time of publishing "Return Home". What I got was a downvote on my request (It does not matter what the group) and an attempt to vandalize the Gdoc page. Maybe I'm not so good at asking, so I thought it was better to try to improve by writing (other than reading, obviously). But any help, or ideas, is welcome.
Meanwhile, I'll try to read this chapter again.
That was excellent. I love seeing scenes where Trixie puts on an awesome show. Given that it's her talent, you'd expect her to be excellent, so it's always a treat to see her do it properly.
And it's also the thing she loves the most in the world, so that was an excellent addition.
Good chapter. I'll have to remember that 'telekinetic sense' bit for the future. It makes a lot of sense, actually.
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To me too. Trixie makes a living doing stage magic in a world full of magicians. She has to be good. And that's her talent and her life, she has to like it.
Glad that you appreciated it.