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Don't stop running.
Don't stop moving.
And whatever you do, for the love of God, do not turn around.
This is the mantra that Matthew, a lone human in Equestria, repeats in his head as he sprints through the woods on a particularly dark night.
Something is following him. Something that won't stop chasing him until it catches him.
What would you do if you were being hunted?
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5849582
Did you even read the fic? Or did you down vote this fic as soon as you saw the human tag?
Regardless, I'll answer your question. I find that introducing a human to a world from where they used to be the top of the food chain, to where they're under something that they used to be above, to be infinitely interesting. And I like making stories about it.
If you don't like my story because of humans, that seems like more your problem than it is mine.
5850047
Top of the food chain? Humans? We're not even a threat to the true top predators of this planet, we're on the level similar to that of pigs and anchovies. Look up the Proceedings of the Natural Academy of Sciences as it has research done by French Researchers using statistical findings from the U.N Food and Agricultural Orginization to find where humans lie on the Trophic Level. On a scale of 1 to 5, 1 being Primary Producers (Plants) and 5 being an apex predator, an animal that only consists on a diet of meat, and has few to no natural predators, these being beings like tigers and other such top of the food chain animals. Where we fall is a score of 2.21 which is similar to that of a pig or an anchovies diet. However that doesn't mean we aren't capable of defend our selves from the scientific discription of a 'top of the food chain' animal. We just simply don't consist only on a diet of meat of a predatory animal. We consist on both plants and animals, we don't strictly eat meat, or meat of a predator.
5850047
Uh... how does this stop me from being interested in it any less?
Last time I checked, clop is still on the featured list every day, and that's been done to hell and back several thousand times, and people are still interested in it. So... Logic? 
Also, give me three fics that involve humans becoming a snack that are not my own fics, nor Ingress: Fraternisation or Going Bump In The Night and I'll believe that statement.
Which one?
I answered this.
Uhm, considering this is fan fiction, no this did not actually happen to me.
I did have a nightmare of something chasing me through the woods though, it was pretty unpleasant.
5850472
Iiii am not going to get into environmental/biological debates. I'll just stick to what I do well: writing horse werds.
I probably enjoyed reading this too much... (Why can't this happen to me? :c)
Good storey! Enjoyed reading it from my shitty hotel I'm in right now!
5850672
And continue doing so good sir or Madame. I very much enjoyed the story, after all being eaten is a primal fear that all beings have. I thoroughly enjoyed the characters, the best ways to make something scary, that appears to be very adorable, is to prove its not. Or is the actual type of horror I enjoy, the kind wherein it's our mind can imagine what it is, after all, your imagination is the best at creating fear. I thought it was a soul devouring cat demon until the reveal. Also I wasn't going to continue it as, I've found something I enjoy more than debates... Reading horse werds.
5851524
Ah, but I did explain why I used a human.
I didn't need to use one, but I did anyways, because I wanted to. One of the benefits of making stories you know, you get to choose what's used in them, instead of commenting in random stories and criticizing people for using something you don't like to get a rise out of them.
5851598
I answered your question, and then referred back to my answer three times. It seems to me you've got nothing much better to be doing if you keep claiming I didn't answer your question, when my answer is in my first comment on this story. Don't blame me if you can't leave well enough alone, m8.
I can't believe half of this comment section is an argument on the author's right to use humans in his fan fiction.
Honestly people introduce humans and ten times more insane stuff all the time on this site, they don't need a reason to do so. They do it because they think it would be fun and interesting, and some of the time it is. It creates this sites most original works
Such is the case for this work. All the characters were full of life and Echo was particularly fun. I would like to see a full story with this concept, but I get the feeling that's not where you planned to go with this. It felt like a glimpse into a world, and even though you don't show all of that world it feels like it's there. So I'll be looking forward to more, hopefully just as good, work in the future.
This is a good story my friend. Kudos on a job well done.
5852088
I wouldn't think too much of it, he/she's just a troll.
But thank you, as of right now I don't have any plans to continue this but that may change in the future. ^^
5851802
But... Echo-pony is hungry.
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5852153
Thank you!
Pretty good story. either SA Starla is a troll or doesn't know that people can write whatever they want as long as it doesn't violate the site's rules.
5850047 Yes they did. You asked
and they answered
5850472 Alright, then what ARE the 'true' predators?
5851754 Shut up! Just... shut up and stop saying stupid shit. Why did you feel like you 'need' to use a human. What the hell kind of question is that? 'Need'. It's fanfiction. 'I wanted to write it' is ALL the 'need' that somebody requires. They answered your question REPEATEDLY, and you kept saying 'no, that's not enough, not enough, not enough'.
On a related note, good story. I didn't expect Echo.
5855850
Have you seen my name?
I know what vore is, but the number of well reputed vore fics (involving humans) can be counted off on my hand. It's not overdone.
5856299
There is no term in science for 'true' predators. The term you should be saying is Apex Predator; Animals that have the only dietary option of solely meat with only a few or no predators of themselves. These animals include the African Wild Dog, Tigers, many of the species of Sharks, Boas just to list a few.
5856559 You said 'true top predators'. And actually, you don't need to only eat meat to be an Apex Predator. You just have to have your adults not be hunted.
5856567
I'll be completely honest you interpreted what I said wrong. We are NOT a top predator, I was using true in the form of a true or false statement. I was saying we weren't a top predator in a different way than telling flat out. Science defines Apex Predator by Trophic Levels, a system that goes from 1 to 5 and apex predators fall in the highest tier. This means they solely eat meat as the highest is 5, as 1 is plants.
5856647 Well... I'm a physicist, not a biologist, so I'll concede to you on that.
5856705
I'm not a biologist either, I'm a zoologist.
5856736 In my mind that's just a subset of biology.
5856754
Will admit sometimes it feels like it but other times it's really fun, though I could do with less "Let's examine this pile of fecal matter."
Zoology is shitty business.
5857872
A bad idea, in your opinion. judging by the overall reception of the story, seems like it worked out well for me. It's almost as if I used the characters in ways that I wanted to and made it work regardless; what a concept, am I right?
And for what I wanted to use, a human was relevant. Your point is invalid.
Look, I'm done. You've proven time and time again you're not here to actually critique the story itself; you're here to complain about humans. If you're going to hiss and snarl every time a human is used on a story, I've kept you unblocked because it was amusing, but now it's starting to get old, so enjoy being the first person I've blocked on fimfiction.
5857965
What's a fore fic?
Also, there aren't any vore tags.
5857872
The same could be said for Vogons, or Klingons, or a Jedi!
It's almost as though you're stating your opinion and personal taste as fact... nah, that CAN'T be it.
I'm sorry, I need a moment to wrap my head around the sheer, inane stupidity of what you just said.
Okay. So you're saying... that the creative process for creating a story... has to be limited by outside parameters. 'A story about ponies must only include ponies, using other things just for the sake of using them is bad'. Until you replace it with 'A story about humans and ponies must only include...' And then it stops seeming so logical, doesn't it?
And here we have the proof that you've, since reading it, FORGOTTEN the author's reason.
Allow me to repeat myself.
It's almost as though you're stating your opinion and personal taste as fact... nah, that CAN'T be it.
Your grammar broke down here; I have no idea what you're trying to convey, but given past trends I think I can safely assume you're passing your personal taste in stories as fact again.
AND AGAIN!
5858304
He's blocked mate, let's just wash our hands of this and leave it behind us. There's just no reasoning with some people who make it their purpose in life to be dicks to others.
I would like to see your rendition on how a relationship between these two would work out.
5867469
Hm? What do you mean?
5869099 I would like to know the details behind how they came to know each other, how he arrived in Equestria and so forth.
I won't lie when I read the description I immediately thought of actual cannibal Shia lebouf
Man, I LOVE YOU
(no homo) but you're amazing. Youre very creative. Ive looked for this type of stories ever since i became a voraphile, which was like 3 months ago. Sir, you have talent. Hope to hear from you soon.
You...surprised me. This was the first time that I've ever heard of Echo. Well written.
Gota say I loved it I have a suggestion if you have any spare time could you make Mathew and echo story go further. Yes. no. mabye so?
5849996
Ik this is years old but you kinda help scratch that itch of human's falling prey to poines/animals of equestrian. I got into the mlp fandom not cause of the show but cause of cupcakes n rainbow factory and the lack of human's getting hurt or killed is disappointing lacking I blame the reviewers HuMans aRe The superior SpeCies and the writers lack of will to ignore that. There is not 1 cupcakes involving a human fic there is 1 of rainbow factory involving anon but it's eh 5/10.I just like dark takes on kid's shows I grew up with Danny phantom getting dissected by his own parent's? Instant fave dipper pines losing his sanity over a flying Dorito? Insta fave.