Blossomforth's life is turned upside down when she is infected by a mysterious, alien substance that radically chances her organic nature. Is it a blessing or a curse? Now she has to deal with new, strange instincts and even stranger abilities.
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This was actually a good read, surprisingly enough. I think I remember reading something like this from a literary magazine too.
This was easily one of the best chapters of the story! Loved seeing the world from Thingpone's perspective, and understanding this extremely odd and confusing creature better!
Prediction: Thingpone's empathy develops to the point where it can't bring itself to assimilate all life, so it forms a symbiotic relationship with host planets instead. This new system has it consuming organisms and returning the consciousnesses to a new body. This paves the way for biological development in all host worlds via forced evolution, while still maintaining a constant or even advanced rate of technological improvement. By the time any others of its kind arrive, Thingpone's empire will outclass it by a laughable margin.
Love the story so far, and this chapter was especially good. I like the extra backstory, and I really like how the story is going.
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Thanks for all the compliments! This fic being my very first attempt at writing fiction of any type ever. So far it has been a bit of a roller coaster ride with all the variety things in the fic. I hope future chapters continue being interesting and of higher quality.
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Who knows, maybe she'll find your planet and before you know it a member of her hivemind will hunt you down, stick its tongue down your throat and assimilate you from the inside out! <3
From now on I will try to respond to every comment posted. Today being a day off I will definitely be working on the next chapter. Sometimes I get a real good idea and it just flows quickly. Other times I have to dig deep for the idea that blossoms into a chapter.
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This is a very good chapter! It's pretty similar to some thoughts about progression of advanced lifeforms I've had before, said thoughts originating from multiple science fiction stories and calculations of the expansion of space fairing life.
The closest words I can use to describe how this made me feel is 'expansion porn'. Pure and simple. I've always wanted to write a story about alien races dominating the universe, and this put out the thought in the forefront of my mind again
6512226 dat backstory tho
So far I'm really enjoying what I'm reading. Great back story for thingpony and excellent characterizations so far. Keep working as you have. I look forward to getting caught up and future updates.
It's kind of scary how Thingpone's race works. Imagine killing every single living creature on a planet. That's like me reading every book in a library and then nuking the city it's in. That's cold dude. I'm not sure how I feel about this chapter, good writing style, but really dark subject. Still like the story though.
6518668 Bahahaha oh hahahaha! Blossoms into a chapter!
I won't lie, I am both very scared and aroused by this story and I'm not sure which I should be feeling more Other than that I quite enjoy this story
I knew, one way or another, that this story was gonna begin going in this direction. Thingpone is so obsessed with assimiliating others and conquering the galaxy...
...but when i'm reading what is presented to us it actually does make sense why she would want to conquer the galaxy so i think it fits as a motive for the creature.
And also, i really enjoyed the world-building in this chapter. The lore you've established in this story fits perfectly with what The Thing as an entity is. Not to mention the war and being pushed to desperation where The Things are now forced to strive for survival.
I just really enjoy this story so far, and is looking forward to reading about more in upcoming chapters and seeing more of this struggle that Blossomforth and Thingpone are eventually going to have.
That was an awsome back story.
Dropping the story here for now. Nothing personal, but reading anon's parts was just so unfun.
I might return later for the rest of the thingpone stuff, but for now, it's gonna sit in my read later. I hope you hone your craft and improve and I wish you luck for the future. But I'm done for now.
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There were a couple things that came to light in this chapter to me.
1: was the rival apex predator race like the flood or xenomorphs or the yuuzhan vong
2: I know you said that she was the apex predator of this new galaxy. But how can she be certain that there are worlds where creatures have massive power that go beyond her. Think about it this one world she came to has Celestia, Luna, Discord and a whole host of OP creatures would it be a stretch to believe their are more powerful planets?
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I was thinking that perhaps the rival is a technology or nanomachine based species. Not really sure yet but they are powerful enough to be a threat to Thing's species.
Like I said before, I'm not sure if Discord exists in this story or not. He's a bit too much of a deus ex machina for my tastes. However, when it comes to Celestia, or Luna. She could simply enter their bodies as a disease or a parasite and perhaps slowly replace her body parts in a way that she won't notice until all her cells have been infected. When that happens she would be in complete control over their bodies.
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Thanks for reading!
Interesting. This fic, whilst not my fetish, really has some interesting ideas, especially the world building here. The whole galaxy harvesting gave me some strong Tyranid vibes.
Careful Thingpone, your directives (reconstructed as they are) are subject to... Alteration...