Blossomforth's life is turned upside down when she is infected by a mysterious, alien substance that radically chances her organic nature. Is it a blessing or a curse? Now she has to deal with new, strange instincts and even stranger abilities.
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For the lazy people:
Just remember to remove the space
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Okay, I chuckled.
Pretty great concept. My only true compliants are that you tend to have sentences after sentences that don't connect well, hard to follow grammar, and some redundant phrases and word choices. Another issue is progression and descriptive flow. Although, you're pretty consistent when it comes to spelling, so that's a plus.
All in all, I really like it so far, especially when she discovered what she was turning into and screamed with an ungodly wail, but it would be phenomenally better with an editor, or maybe some major revisions.
7014425 Definitely agree with you there. I have some problems with that especially in the early chaptets. I like to think I improved a bit as the chapters go on but it is perfectly possible that I am still bad at it lol. Another thing is that I need to introduce more characters, I suppose that requires authorship and imaginative maturity, something that I might or might not have yet.
Wow, I've only ever seen the double helix integrated into sex once before, and that was in Corruption of Champions.
Then again, it's used differently there. A hermaphroditic double helix. Corruption of Champions... Thingpone would fit right in there.
IfyaknowwhatImean.
Well; Anon. That explains the human tag.
I'm outie, PEACE!
Would this perhaps be based on the movie, 'The Thing'?
"stretchy giraffe" lmao
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π an entity of culture, we see...
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"Ya think?"