Blossomforth's life is turned upside down when she is infected by a mysterious, alien substance that radically chances her organic nature. Is it a blessing or a curse? Now she has to deal with new, strange instincts and even stranger abilities.
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Kinky
Interesting stuff so far, although there are 2 points that bug me:
-Chapter 4 seems a bit wordy in places: you could probably cut down the unnecessary dialogue.
-Just a personal one, but the brain slug thing smacks a bit too much of mind control for my liking, which I usually try to avoid in stories. Hopefully it doesn't come to that.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
This Reminds me of a Manga by the title of 'Parasite' or something like that. It had an alien parasite that invaded the Earth, though the protagonist was infected only in his arm, and it gained sentience. The instincts were still there. It was a very... strange read. So is this, but it is interesting as well.
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-True. I attempted to incorporate more dialogue in my writing in that chapter. I suppose dialogue is not my strong point. Hopefully the quality of my writing has been improving as the chapters progress.
-Big sister just wants to make sure you don't hurt yourself
6394507 Pain builds character, dammit! Now that I think of it, I don't meet much characters nowdays...
Nice stretches. I wish I could do that.
6475848 Thanks! I am stretching tonight after neglecting it for almost 3 weeks I guess that is what the Destiny expansion does to me... You or anyone is welcome to join me on video Skype if they want to learn. I have also been working on another chapter lately. I am guessing its about 1/4 done.
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I thought I was getting used to it.
I was wrong.
power to the male contortionist. it's great to meet another fellow who enjoys bending in freakish ways. loving the story so far and i feel kind of bad for letting it sit in my read later box for so long, the cover art was really off putting but i am glad i gave it a chance. keep up the great work
References!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is getting good
You know her logic about the mane six blasting her with the elements right away if they found out is a little sketchy i mean they've seen some pretty whacky stuff and with pinkie pie, twilight and fluttershy i reckon if she just told them and explained i reckon they would take it very well to be perfectly honest i mean they have seen their nightmare night icon come to life a soul sucking centaur and gone up against the spirit of chaos who might i add is easy on the same level of weirdness as thingpone if not more so cause think about it he can turn himself into a thing should he feel like it
Big sister=big brother?
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pretty much
Ah, the troubles with hotlinks, they tend to expire...
Espionage session success! Now to make it sound natural...
How long were you practicing yoga before you reached the level of flexibility seen in those pictures?
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A couple of years I think but I wasn't being super consistent with my stretch regimen. I can still do all those poses now except for the frontbend because I have more belly fat. Kind of took a break and was only maintaining flexibility rather than progressing. Lack of strength has been holding me back from really reaching the next level of flexibility so I've been working on that more. Slowly breaking through to the next level.
Generally if you are younger you can learn more quickly. However, anyone who is consistent, disciplined and applies the correct technique can learn to be a real contortionist within probably a year if they keep a consistent and disciplined practice.
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Do you also do strength training? I hear it's good to balance both.
Also, you make stretching sound super fun. My ham strings are really tight, I should really work on my flexibility.
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Yeah, doing some of the strange poses in contortion means strengthening muscles that you may not usually use. If you have too much flexibility with not enough strength to back it up you can end up getting hurt or experience pain in some joints. Also strengthening the correct muscles through active stretches and resistance training (using gravity or lifting weights) will give you increased control in moving/flexing the limb or body part more freely.