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LovinglyBourbon
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Excellente. Not bad, not bad at all.
5879033
I am kind of surprised. I was half expecting this to be halfway to oblivion by now.
5879039
I'm not sure if my like is because the scene if from one of my favorite movies with Gene Wilder, or because I find it so amusing
This story was great.
A fun read, quite effective. You may have a future in this.
This fic deserves many favorites, but I can only give it one :( Best of luck to the new couple.. errr.. triple?
This was really good
Hm... it was intense. And it didn't get overly incesty, which is quite nice.
Hey! You posted it, and it did really good.
5889790
I'm a bit surprised myself. Bit disappointed it fell short of featured status, but no point in crying over spilt milk. I'll just have to try try again
5889801 You hit triple digit likes pretty damn fast.
Not bad and very hot for the first time.
5895287
Thank you.
Eh, it wasn't badly written or anything, but I can't really get into the whole hick brother and sister banging thing.
5895831
Thank you for your honesty. If I am going to be honest, I assumed it would be downvoted to oblivion becasue it involved incest. I never imagined it would do as good as it did
5895835 Lol, like I said, it was well written. Lots of people are more open minded with their smut then me. Ha! Gotta have something for everyone and all that.
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That pretty much why I made it a threesome. And also added the anal. I figured the "AppleMac" scene had been played out by the end of season 2. Had to find a way to make it interesting
On a side note, may I ask you something? Did it some across as too repetetive? I couldn't help but feel it was, but I didn't was to fall victim to the lavender unicorn syndrome.
5895899 Well, I kind of glazed past the parts i didn't like, but it didn't seem too repetitive. It was basically a "plot what plot" type of story. Kind of like a short porn. There was a large word count, but the bulk of it was just the sex. It was most likely the word count (and the possibility of Rarijack) that drew me in. This was 75% sex and 25% story. I like 75% story and 25% sex. The likes and dislikes right now are 111 like 11 dislike, so you basically have 90% approval rating at this time. That's not bad. You added a lot of fetishes so more people would have more chances to enjoy it, but that also give people more things to dislike. There's no way to make us all happy. One of my favorite writers adds stuff that I hate. Doesn't make me stop reading his stuff, because the story makes up for it. I don't like incest, tentacle porn or massive amounts of girls getting jizzed all over. I find it extra funny when it's two girls and one is futa style, then the writer has these huge cum shots all over the other girls face and the girl thinks it's the best thing ever. I find it lame. Most guys love that stuff. Too bad i'm a girl , lol. I know most of these stories are aimed at guys, but just so you know, most girls that say they like that are just saying to make their guy happy. So when it's two girls and it's done I find it lame. Hmm, that went way off topic......sorry!
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I can see your point. My initial intent was to give it a set up, a little story, but focuse more on the intimacy. It was my first one, so I am glad that it did well. If anything, I thought that it would max at about 20 or 30 likes then just be swallowed by red. As you can probably tell, I have not much confidence. Pessimism is quite possibly my special talent. Or as I like to call it, being realistic.
5896425 Doing great for a first story. Keep it up!!
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Lol. I cant tell if you are being sincere or if you are saying that becasue I told you what makes me special. Either way, thanks a lot. Nice to have someone give me feedback other than just "nice story." I appreciate all feedback, but more in-depth feedback helps me to improve
I cannot tell a lie. Great story.
5896512 Nah, i'm being sincere. Just because this is the internet it doesn't mean everyone is mean. My mommy raised me better then that, lol.
Really good. Especially being your first clop. You, dear sir, earned this:
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Ecellent work. Maybe consider "branching out" with more euphemisms for genitalia. I kept seeing trees and apples. Not that there's anything wrong with that. For a first attempt, this was very well done!
Nice story, but there's one minor thing you may want to edit.
I knew there'd be nude, crude, lewd action when AJ invited Rarara back to the barn! I could barely stifle my laughter at Rarity's reaction to getting down and dirty with the apple family! Even better when she got mad at not getting her climax! Overall, the story was well written with clever wordplay and bits of comedy thrown in.
Help I've fallen and I can't get up.
Get it
Might be late since this fic is 4 years old but damn am I glad I found it. I love some Rarity lewdness, especially if it's with, imo, the best boy of MLP. Throwing some Applecest in the mix was just a bonus.
For a first clop fic, this was damn good. Nice job
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Not too late. Time has a way of rewarding the patient with unexpected gifts. Such as you found this story. Glad to hear people still enjoy what little I ever produced